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Some people believe that clean and neat streets are the responsibility pf residents, others believe that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people believe that clean and neat streets are the responsibility pf residents, others believe that it is the responsibility of the government. KBPk
Cleanliness is an essential issue in our lives as harmony is evident in a clean surrounding. It is argued by some that it is the responsibility of citizens to keep the roads, especially around our homes, clean while a number of believing that our regime is responsible for this. In this essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion. To embark with, every citizen who is a resident of our country has been given the right to move to any part of the country of his choice. Apparently, it is also the first duty of that citizen to pay attention to keeping the surrounding environment, such as roads, etc. clean. For example, in the huge cities of the country like Mumbai, the number of factories and industrial areas is increasing on a daily basis. Consequently, pollution is escalating. To curb this, citizens should pay maximum attention to cleanliness and keep the habitat around them tidy. At the same time, plant more trees to avoid pollution of a surrounding. Correspondingly, they ought to dump waste at designated places, keep the roads clean, and also need to avoid or reduce the usage of plastic. Furthermore, inhabitants ought to abide by the municipal laws and regulations, and most importantly, they must pay taxes, which would be funding the services they get in numerous ways. Similarly, the authority shall take a number of steps for a cleaner atmosphere, such as raising awareness among the public about the importance of cleanliness and encouraging citizens to keep their surroundings clean. For illustration, every authenticated water pump through which water enters people's homes will be fitted with clean water filters to prevent contamination caused by contaminated water. Moreover, steps will be taken to clean up roads, where dirty water accumulates on rainy days as numerous deadly diseases like Dengue caused by contaminated water can be curbed. In conclusion, despite the fact that the inhabitant has an immensely critical contribution to make in keeping his surroundings clean, however, I opine that the regime and the common citizen have an equal responsibility to do their utmost to keep the atmosphere tidy. Contribution is mandatory to the cause, owing to the fact that only in a clean habitat, pure humanity originates.
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lives
as harmony is evident in a
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clean
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surrounding
. It
is argued
by
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some
that it is the responsibility of
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citizens
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keep
the
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roads
,
especially
around our homes,
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clean
while a number of believing that our regime is responsible for this. In this essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion.

To embark with, every
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citizen
who is a resident of our country has been
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given
the right to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to any part of the country of his choice.
Apparently
, it is
also
the
first
duty of that
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citizen
to pay attention to keeping the
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surrounding
environment, such as
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roads
, etc.
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clean
.
For example
, in the huge cities of the country like Mumbai, the number of factories and industrial areas is increasing on a daily basis.
Consequently
, pollution is escalating. To curb this,
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citizens
should pay maximum attention to cleanliness and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
the habitat around them tidy. At the same time, plant more trees to avoid pollution of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
surrounding
.
Correspondingly
, they ought to dump waste at designated places,
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keep
the
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roads
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clean
, and
also
need to avoid or
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reduce
the usage of plastic.
Furthermore
, inhabitants ought to abide by the municipal laws and regulations, and most
importantly
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
pay taxes, which would be funding the services they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in numerous ways.

Similarly
, the authority shall take a number of steps for a cleaner atmosphere, such as raising awareness among the public about the importance of cleanliness and encouraging
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citizens
to
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keep
their
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surroundings
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clean
. For illustration, every authenticated
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water
pump through which
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water
enters
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people
's homes will
be fitted
with
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clean
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water
filters to
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prevent
contamination caused by contaminated
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water
.
Moreover
, steps will
be taken
to
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clean
up
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roads
, where dirty
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water
accumulates on rainy days as numerous deadly diseases like Dengue caused by contaminated
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water
can
be curbed
.

In conclusion
, despite the fact that the inhabitant has an
immensely
critical contribution to
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make
in keeping his
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surroundings
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clean
,
however
, I opine that the regime and the common
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citizen
have an equal responsibility to do their utmost to
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keep
the atmosphere tidy. Contribution is mandatory to the cause, owing to the fact that
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only
in a
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clean
habitat, pure humanity originates.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that clean and neat streets are the responsibility pf residents, others believe that it is the responsibility of the government.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
6.5
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