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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.

There is no doubt that everyone has their own way of seeing things. Things such as severe punishments to those who comets serious crimes are considered controversial until this day. Death should be in the hands of God and it shouldn’t be a penalty as a number of them can say. Although, there are Consequently, a number of types of crimes with a variety of causes. However, the question: is capital punishment should or shouldn’t be used? In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints. It’s commonly believed, that some penalties shouldn’t be applied just like death, electric chair, suffocation and etc. Mainly, people who disagree with these sentenced doesn’t know the reason behind it and they have just made their emotions conquering them. Did they think about how the family of the victim felt like? Or the was that the crime happened? For example, if there was a criminal who has committed a serious of crimes and killed hundreds of people with cold heart. If you were his mother or one of his siblings, you will never be okay with the idea of harming him, no matter what he did before. But what about the victims families? Will they feel that same as? Of course not, they will want that criminal to suffer as much as they did for losing someone they love. In the support of the previous argument, I believe that everyone should think ahead before doing something stupid just like that criminal did. Killing someone isn’t the solution to any arguments, unless that person was having a mental disorder. Maybe in that case there will be another sentence a much lighter one. In conclusion, life will always give you a taste of what you have given to the others. Sometimes, the universe can’t be far with you. But in court, there are evidences, witnesses and people form the community giving their opinions. That’s why these punishments has been made to get justice.
There is no doubt that everyone has their
own
way of seeing things. Things such as severe punishments to those who comets serious
crimes
are considered
controversial until this day. Death should be in the hands of
God and
it shouldn’t be a penalty as a number of them can say. Although, there are

Consequently
, a number of types of
crimes
with a variety of causes.
However
, the question: is capital punishment should or shouldn’t be
used
? In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

It’s
commonly
believed, that
some
penalties shouldn’t
be applied
just
like death, electric chair, suffocation
and etc
.
Mainly
,
people
who disagree with these sentenced doesn’t know the reason behind
it and
they have
just
made their emotions conquering them. Did they
think
about how the family of the victim felt like? Or the was that the
crime
happened?

For example
, if there was a criminal who has committed a
serious
of
crimes
and killed hundreds of
people
with
cold
heart. If you were his mother or one of his siblings, you will never be okay with the
idea
of harming him, no matter what he did
before
.
But
what about the victims families? Will they feel that same as?
Of course
not, they will want that criminal to suffer as much as they did for losing someone they
love
.

In the support of the previous argument, I believe that everyone should
think
ahead
before
doing something stupid
just
like that criminal did. Killing someone isn’t the solution to any arguments, unless that person was having a mental disorder. Maybe
in that case
there will be another sentence a much lighter one.

In conclusion
, life will always give you a taste of what you have
given
to the others.
Sometimes
, the universe can’t be far with you.
But
in court, there are evidences, witnesses and
people
form the community giving their opinions. That’s why these punishments has
been made
to
get
justice.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.

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331 words
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