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Animals Should live in the Nature

Wildlife nature is the best place for animals for several reasons. Before anything else, animals should be free that they should live in nature. Because they get used to it, and they can easily adapt to the nature place better than they are in zoos To conclude that they actually have the great habits they know the place really well they can find and hunt for the food. Also, it's the origin which they are derived from. On the other hand, zoos are the limitation for animals; they are limited from freedom and in the zoos the zookeepers. Actually used violence to the animals, the zookeepers also forcing the animals to do exactly the thing that they want for example, Dolphin was forced to do the show. Like dodging the balls dolphin diving. to summarize, the animals should be free and it's the best that they are in the places where they are born and live without any obedience or intimidation, and they should not get any violence or bad conditions in their life.

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 well they can find and hunt for the food. Also
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places
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live
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