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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.

There is no doubt that everyone has their own way of seeing things. Things such as severe punishments to those who comets serious crimes are considered controversial until this day. Death should be in the hands of God and it shouldn’t be a penalty as some of them can say. Although, there are so many types of crimes with a variety of causes. However, the question: is capital punishment should or shouldn’t be used? In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

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