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some people believe that artificially intelligent robots will replace all jobs. Discuss your opinion v.1

some people believe that artificially intelligent robots will replace all jobs. Discuss your opinion v. 1
There is no septicism that popularity of robots is increasing in many fields. therefore, some peole think that these hi-tech machines will make all jobs redunded. In my opinion, they can be treated as a complementary help, whole work cannot be replaced by them in coming future. To commence with, it is certainly true that robots has become indispensable part of human life. It frees us form drugery of repetitive task and menial jobs that take up maximun time of our life. To elaborate, there are some extreme conditions where sending human is not possible such as in fire. in these kind of places robots have proven their ability. Moreover, these robots are emotionless, they are able to perform many human operations without anytremoror in theitr hand like other doctors. For instance, many eyes operation are performed by robots these days. Hence, this type of development is creating a fear in people mind that these robots will overtake their jobs soon. In my opinion, there is no need to think about its negative develoment because always keep in your mind that these machines are created by humans and all the data feed to them by human beings. In other words, they cannot operate without human instructions. so, Its totally in person's hand how to use them and aware of thae face taht where to strike a balance. peple should use them in such a way to maximez its uses and elliminated the negatives related with it. that, s why, aall jobs replacements will never happen by robots is not possible at any cost. in conclusion, robots play a significant role in many fields. however, all jobs cannot be replced by robots solely because for their functioning, they need human help without it, they are nothing.
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that popularity of robots is increasing in
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many
fields.
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therefore
,
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some
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peole
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think
that these hi-tech machines will
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make
all
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jobs
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redunded
. In my opinion, they can
be treated
as a complementary
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help
, whole work cannot
be replaced
by them in coming future.

To commence with, it is
certainly
true that robots has become indispensable part of
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human
life. It frees us form
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drugery
of repetitive task and menial
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jobs
that take up
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maximun
time of our life. To elaborate, there are
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some
extreme conditions where sending
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human
is not possible such as in fire.
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in
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these kind
of places robots have proven their ability.
Moreover
, these robots are emotionless, they are able to perform
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many
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human
operations without
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anytremoror
in
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theitr
hand like other doctors.
For instance
,
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many
eyes operation
are performed
by robots these days.
Hence
, this type of development is creating a fear in
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people
mind that these robots will overtake their
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jobs
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soon
.

In my opinion, there is no need to
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think
about its
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negative
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develoment
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always
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keep
in your mind that these machines
are created
by
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humans
and all the data feed to them by
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human
beings.
In other words
, they cannot operate without
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human
instructions.
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so
, Its
totally
in person's hand how to
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use
them and aware of
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thae
face
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taht
where to strike a balance.
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peple
should
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use
them in such a way to
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maximez
its
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uses
and
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elliminated
the negatives related with it. that, s why,
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aall
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jobs
replacements will never happen by robots is not possible at any cost.

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in
conclusion, robots play a significant role in
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many
fields.
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however
, all
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jobs
cannot be
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replced
by robots
solely
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because
for their functioning, they need
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human
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help
without it, they are nothing.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay some people believe that artificially intelligent robots will replace all jobs. Discuss your opinion v. 1

Essay
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4 paragraphs
295 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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