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Some people believe that an effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. Others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that an effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. Others think that there are other ways. KY32R
Industrial pollution can be hazardous to humans and other animals living in the surroundings. One way to curbthis is to levy taxes on the corporates responsible for these. Taxing the companies that cause pollution could be an effective way to reduce industrial pollution according tosome, as it provides an indirect motivation for the companies to reduce the pollution and thus avoid paying thosetaxes. This would in turn help increase the company’s revenues and profitability. The proponents of this view alsobelieve the companies need a deterrent to act upon and are not necessarily proactive in caring for theenvironment. This could be true in the case of companies hell bent on making profits and profits alone with scantregard to the society and the environment they operate in. However, this is not always the case. There are other ways. Most of the corporates have a social responsibilityand their businesses are driven by the principle of sustainability. Sustainability is all about being aware of andadhering to factors like climate change, reducing carbon footprint, reducing pollution in a proactive manner. Thereputation and the brand name of such companies could take a colossal hit if they do not adhere to the industryor regulatory standards and they therefore do not need tax as a deterrent. Moreover, the image these corporatestry to build over a period to attract customers like millennials makes it almost mandatory to be environmentfriendly. The modern day customers are well aware of the need for preserving the environment. And thecompanies can ill afford to lose this generation of customers. I think it is imperative for companies to not wait for the authorities or governing bodies to penalise or tax them butproactively take measures to reduce the pollution levels and create a sustainable environment for the planet. Modern day customers are fastidious about the products they use and their choices are not just based on theprice and quality factors but the corporate’s reputation and image in keeping the environment safe and clean.
Industrial
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pollution
can be hazardous to humans and other animals living in the surroundings. One way to
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curbthis
is to levy taxes on the
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corporates
responsible for these. Taxing the
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companies
that cause
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pollution
could be an effective way to
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reduce
industrial
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pollution
according
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tosome
, as it provides an indirect motivation for the
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companies
to
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reduce
the
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pollution
and
thus
avoid paying
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thosetaxes
. This would in turn
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help
increase the
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company’s
revenues and profitability. The proponents of this view
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alsobelieve
the
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companies
need a deterrent to act upon and are not
necessarily
proactive in caring for
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theenvironment
. This could be true in the case of
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companies
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
hell bent
on making profits and profits alone with
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scantregard
to the society and the
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environment
they operate in.
However
, this is not always the case. There are other ways. Most of the
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corporates have
a social
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responsibilityand
their businesses
are driven
by the principle of sustainability. Sustainability is all about being aware of
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andadhering
to factors like climate
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change
, reducing carbon footprint, reducing
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pollution
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in a proactive manner
.
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Thereputation
and the brand name of such
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companies
could take a colossal hit if they do not adhere to the
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industryor
regulatory
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standards and
they
therefore
do not need tax as a deterrent.
Moreover
, the image these
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corporatestry
to build over a period to attract
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customers
like millennials
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makes
it almost mandatory to be
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environmentfriendly
. The modern day
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customers
are well aware of the need for preserving the
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environment
. And
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thecompanies
can ill afford to lose this generation of
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customers
. I
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think
it is imperative for
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companies
to not wait for the authorities or governing bodies to
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penalise
or tax them
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butproactively
take measures to
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reduce
the
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pollution
levels and create a sustainable
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environment
for the planet. Modern day
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customers
are fastidious about the products they
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use
and their choices are not
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just
based on
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theprice
and quality factors
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but
the corporate’s reputation and image in keeping the
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environment
safe and clean.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that an effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. Others think that there are other ways.

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