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Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer living in cold climates. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some would argue that warm and sunny

Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer living in cold climates. Some would argue that warm and sunny 2Px2o
It is often argued that in order to enjoy the lifestyle and for better living whether cold climate is best or sunny days. Although both season have own importance, according to my perception, hot climate brings out the best of living for enjoyment. This essay will discuss both views in forthcoming paragraphs along with my opinion. To commence with winter season, in this period, people can relief from hot as well as enjoy the vegetables which only grow in cold season. To clear it, vegetables as broccoli, cauliflower, beans, and carrots which make people healthy to eat not only they purchase at cheaper price but also it is beneficial for health. In India, for instance, in the winter season, farmers grow potatoes, broccoli, lemons, carrots and tomatoes and the price is almost ninety per cent less compared to the market value in other season. On the other hand, I believe that lifestyle can be enjoy more than winter season because outside moments can be make life more better owing of cold in cold season people can not see the scenic view that only enjoy in beaches as well as other parts of world. For epitome, it has been seen that the number of visitors to the world largest sea beach Cox's Bazar is higher just after the winter and it show that people love to break the monotonous life of the cold period. Therefore, I am convinced that everybody wants to move freely and become active with their family members on a beautiful hot blue sunny day. To conclude, although freezing haze produces healthy food, I prefer to summer season because in this period, individuals can easily go outside for enjoyment.
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argued that in order to
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enjoy
the lifestyle and for better living whether
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cold
climate is best or sunny days. Although both
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season
have
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own
importance, according to my perception, hot climate brings out the best of living for enjoyment. This essay will discuss both views in forthcoming paragraphs along with my opinion.

To commence with
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winter
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season
, in this period,
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people
can relief from hot
as well
as
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enjoy
the vegetables which
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only
grow in
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cold
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season
. To
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clear
it, vegetables as broccoli, cauliflower, beans, and carrots which
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make
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people
healthy to eat not
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only
they
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purchase
at cheaper price
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but
also
it is beneficial for health. In India,
for instance
, in the
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winter
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season
, farmers grow potatoes, broccoli, lemons, carrots and tomatoes and the price is almost ninety per cent less compared to the market value in other season.

On the other hand
, I believe that lifestyle can be
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enjoy
more than
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winter
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season
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because
outside moments can be
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make
life
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more better
owing of
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cold
in
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cold
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people
can not
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see
the scenic view that
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only
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enjoy
in beaches
as well
as other parts of world. For epitome, it has been
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seen
that the number of visitors to the world largest sea beach Cox's
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Bazar
is higher
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just
after the
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winter
and it
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show
that
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people
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love
to break the monotonous life of the
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cold
period.
Therefore
, I
am convinced
that everybody wants to
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move
freely
and become active with their family members on a
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beautiful
hot blue sunny day.

To conclude
, although freezing haze produces healthy food, I prefer to summer
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season
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because
in this period, individuals can
easily
go outside for enjoyment.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer living in cold climates. Some would argue that warm and sunny

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4 paragraphs
281 words
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