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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters

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A handful of people believe that, children should be a liberty to build their own desires on everyday matters like clothes, homework, and entertainment ways. Others ponder that parents should be priority to about children decision and everyday matters. I will discuss both the arguments in ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand, parents should not much interecting with everydays children matter. The liberty of children might be a primary of children success their own chellenges in their life. To elaborate it, if pupils taking a regular basis of work can be develop their patients skills. As results children might be early make well rounded life. For example, in recent survey from Indian express show that, 52% of children in delhi could handling their own school's homework at primary school. On the other hand, children made a decision in their life without any permission from thier parents, it could be enter difficult situation in later life. To explain it, pupils taking a decision without knowing the information and future results, they might a tengible results in future. In conclusion, I believe that children should be liberated at some extent way and limited sources, that might a great results and get success early.
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decision and everyday matters. I will discuss both the arguments in ensuing paragraphs.

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IELTS essay Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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