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Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school. While others believe it is better to wait until a child is at Secondary school.

Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school. While others believe it is better to wait until a child is at Secondary school. 6xoQW
It is clear that, In modern life, children have more chances to learn foreign languages. According to some people it is better to start learning foreign languages from they begin the school, while others choose Secondary school. In this essay i will give some examples and give my opinion In the 21st century, as time goes on, there are enough opportunities for children's education, aren't there? It is much more effective to teach language to children from an early age because the main activities of children are reading, playing, sleeping and watching cartoons. They quickly memorize everything only in different ways. For example: with the help of various games, cartoons, etc. Researchers have found that children try to replicate what they see. However, parents should not keep their children busy just Studying because their children should do their childhood. Today, some parents keep their children busy with education and as a result, children are growing up with a load. It can have a devastating effect on their lives. And decorating situations can be felt in everything. Therefore, I think it is better for children to start learning languages ​​in high school, because then the child will have a strong desire to learn. In conclusion It is better to learn foreign language for children If they learn it on schedule.
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that, In modern life,
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have more chances to learn foreign
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learning foreign
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the school, while others choose Secondary school. In this essay
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enough
opportunities for children's education, aren't there? It is much more effective to teach
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language
to
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children
from an early age
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because
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children
are reading, playing, sleeping and watching cartoons. They
quickly
memorize everything
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only
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different
ways.
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help
of various games, cartoons, etc. Researchers have found that
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children
try to replicate what they
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.

However
, parents should not
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busy
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should do their childhood.
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parents
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busy with education and
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children
are growing up with a load. It can have a devastating effect on their
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lives
. And decorating situations can
be felt
in everything.

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it is better for
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children
to
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learning
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​​in high school,
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then the child will have a strong desire to learn.

In conclusion
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language
for
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children
If they learn it on schedule.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school. While others believe it is better to wait until a child is at Secondary school.

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