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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. XLN8
Many individuals assume that culture is something that is known by their nation, the standard of living, behaviour, attitudes, and others say it has an impact on what they see in their region and how they adopt them. In this essay, we discuss both views in detail. However, the style of living mostly depends on where they are living or in which country they live. Many refer that is it because of the norms that have an impact on your thinking, behaviour and lifestyle which you usually adopt when you are living in the country starting from birth. For instance, a person is living in an Islamic nation from his birth, when he grows up he adopts their values and how they socialise. The way of greeting and how women cover up their self. It depends on the time how much has been spent there by a folk. Moreover, as per the argument values have a great effect on a person's personality. On the other hand, most probably it is true because not everyone gets used to the same tradition as per as long they belong from there. In Addition, different homeland has a different tradition and not every accustom. For example, if the folk is living abroad he will follow the norms of the country but somehow he will be known by his region of origin. In conclusion, In my opinion, as per the, statement a person is the definition of their culture from where he belongs and where he lives and adopt his values from that place because habits are something which can not be developed in yourself in a day. It can be accustomed to the period of time.
Many
individuals assume that culture is something that
is known
by their nation, the standard of
living
,
behaviour
, attitudes,
and others
say it has an impact on what they
see
in their region and how they
adopt
them. In this essay, we discuss both views in detail.

However
, the style of
living
mostly
depends on where they are
living
or in which country they
live
.
Many
refer
that is
it
because
of the norms that have an impact on your thinking,
behaviour
and lifestyle which you
usually
adopt
when you are
living
in the country starting from birth.
For instance
, a person is
living
in an Islamic nation from his birth, when he grows up he
adopts
their values and how they
socialise
. The way of greeting and how women cover up their self. It depends on the time how much has
been spent
there by a folk.

Moreover
, as per the argument values have a great effect on a person's personality.
On the other hand
, most
probably
it is true
because
not everyone
gets
used
to the same tradition as per as long they belong from there.
In Addition
,
different
homeland has a
different
tradition and not every accustom.
For example
, if the folk is
living
abroad he will follow the norms of the country
but
somehow he will
be known
by his region of origin.

In conclusion
, In my opinion, as per
the,
statement a person is the definition of their culture from where he belongs and where he
lives
and
adopt
his values from that place
because
habits are something which can not
be developed
in yourself in a day. It can
be accustomed
to the period of time.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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