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Some People believe physical punishment leads children to have good behaviour while others disagree

Some People believe physical punishment leads children to have good behaviour while others disagree 7EXY

Children are the future of the nation and how they should be raised, is a debatable issue. Some people believe that they should be exposed to the physical punishment while other say constant appreciation is required for them. According to me, these arguments need proper inspection before forming any opinion. To begin with, there are many advantages of consulting rewards to children first of all, appreciation and verbal praise can have a magical impact on the behavior of the children because when they are appreciated for good conduct they come to know about value of good behavior and try to keep continue with that. The more they brim with positive comments, the more they are confident. On the other hand, children who are subjected to artificial physical punishment are seen with lack of self confidence. A survey conducted on behavior of children revealed that a child exposed to punitive actions my parents are more aggressive and furious than others of his age. Hence beatings to child can never be fruitful. On the other hand, there is no denying the fact that training to the infamous and ferocious mind is a hard nut to crack because it is true that rod the only logic for the fools. Moreover, some children repeat mistakes even after being warned and punished, this type of stubbornness force parents and guardians to give them beatings. Needless to say, over pampering may have adverse effect on children. In this present scenario, parents have one or two children and this pampering distract them away from their path. To conclude, children are the tender buds and nurturing them is really a major responsibility. Therefore, a fair judgment on behavior is required for good upbringing.

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