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Nowadays small shops are replaced by supermarkets. Due you think it has more advantages rather than its disadvantages.

Nowadays small shops are replaced by supermarkets. Due you think it has more advantages rather than its disadvantages. 2ELX
In the modern era, supermarkets become more popular by replacing local shops. I believe thatits advantages are overlapping its disadvantages. one obvious unfavourable aspect is due to bomb of number of shopping malls. It has an adverse effect on local business. It is evident that if local shops are put back by super malls. More individuals prefers to shop at super malls instead of local stores. Thus, directly affect the employment of local business. However, there are far more merits of supermarkets compared to local shop. First and foremost is that it would be convenient method for purchasers. To be more precise it is more helpful for people who have shortage of time they would by all their products or goods under a one roof of supermarket. Secondly, it provides many facility such as entertainment and parking has provided a lot of convenience to their buyer. To Conclude, human are ables to buy their good with easy method. People got all their nedded products under a single roof and have more beneficial than local shops. Therefore, its merits are more than its demerits.
In the modern era, supermarkets become more popular by replacing
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local
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shops
. I believe
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thatits
advantages are overlapping its disadvantages.
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one
obvious
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unfavourable
aspect is due to bomb of number of shopping malls. It has an adverse effect on
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local
business. It is evident that if
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local
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shops
are put
back by super malls. More individuals prefers to
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shop
at super malls
instead
of
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local
stores.
Thus
,
directly
affect the employment of
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local
business.

However
, there are far more merits of supermarkets compared to
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local
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shop
.
First
and foremost is that it would be convenient method for purchasers. To be more precise it is more helpful for
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people
who have shortage of time they would
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by
all their products or
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goods
under a one roof of supermarket.
Secondly
, it provides
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many facility
such as entertainment and parking has provided
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a lot of
convenience to their buyer.

To Conclude
, human are
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ables
to
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buy
their
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good
with easy method.
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People
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got
all their
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nedded
products under a single roof and have more beneficial than
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local
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shops
.
Therefore
, its merits are more than its demerits.
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IELTS essay Nowadays small shops are replaced by supermarkets. Due you think it has more advantages rather than its disadvantages.

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