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Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now. e6gO

There is no place for crime in the world. People opine that governments should take preventive steps to mitigate crime. While others say that crime prevention should be handled effectively. However, I believe the former view and discuss it in subsequent paragraphs. First and foremost, crimes have been increasing every day. Due to advancement in technology, cybercrime frauds appear to a larger extent. Nowadays, everything is done online such as transaction of money, order food, etc. Consequently, there are greater chances of frauds. According to the times, frauds like this augmented 25% more than last year. On the other hand, poverty and education are the main reason for crimes. People who don't have money, pursue their livelihood by doing the mugging. So, the government shall fund the schools and more on educational amenities. Inversely, it might help those who ended there career being a robber. Hopefully, they all get an education and evaluate their life in a good way. To sum up, the government should prohibit online transactions. Education is helpful to eradicate crimes and the public has to face a low possibility of crimes.

There is no place for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 in the world. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 opine that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 should take preventive steps to mitigate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 others say that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
 prevention should be handled
effectively
.

However
, I believe the former view and discuss it in subsequent paragraphs.

First
 and foremost, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 have been increasing every day. Due to advancement in technology, cybercrime frauds appear to a larger extent. Nowadays, everything is done
 online such as transaction of money, order food, etc. Consequently
, there are greater chances of frauds. According to the times, frauds like this augmented 25% more than last year.

On the other hand
, poverty and education are the main reason for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 who don't have money, pursue their livelihood by doing the mugging. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 shall fund the schools and more on educational amenities. Inversely
, it might This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 those who ended there career being a robber. Hopefully
, they all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an education and evaluate their life in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 way.

To sum up, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should prohibit online transactions. Education is helpful to eradicate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
 and the public This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 face a low possibility of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
. 