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Some people believe online classes are more handy while others think learning in class is productive and beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, online courses have become more popular and many students enroll in them. Many people nonetheless prefer the traditional classroom approach. In my opinion, both online and classroom courses have their merits; even so I prefer the online course rather than traditional ones. To begin with, online courses certainly have numerous advantages. Firstly, online classes are cheaper, students who cannot afford the expensive college education prefer the online courses where they acquire the valuable skills and earn degree. Secondly, online classes are more flexible, you can take them whenever you want and wherever you are. By contrast, in regular course you have to be in classroom at specified time. Online education preferred by working professional who want to upgrade their skills. For instance, Germany is known for automobile company, if the working professionals want to learn about the automobiles, no need to go outside for it, the experts arrange the online lectures through Skype to upgrade their skills. On the other hand, some personal consider that regular class room courses are more beneficial because it leads to interaction between student and teacher. A machine can only deliver lesson, it cannot figure out the problems of the learners’ whether they understood the concept or not. The instructor easily analyzed that student understands the lecture or not by simply notice their facial expression. The educator solved the problems of students and this is helpful for their progress. To illustrate, in a survey in India, it is observed that graduate are still interested in coaching centers to learn language computer and other courses because they want to interact with tutor to clear their doubts. To summarize, although regular classes have emotional touch and online course are free of stress. In my opinion, online learning programmes are better because it is accessible to everyone, even people who have a full time job.
Nowadays,
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have become more popular and
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enroll in them.
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nonetheless prefer the traditional classroom approach. In my opinion, both
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and classroom
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have their merits; even
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I prefer the
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rather
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with,
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certainly
have numerous advantages.
Firstly
,
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online
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classes
are cheaper,
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students
who cannot afford the expensive college education prefer the
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online
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courses
where they acquire the valuable
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skills
and earn degree.
Secondly
,
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online
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classes
are more flexible, you can take them whenever you
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want
and wherever you are. By contrast, in regular
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course
you
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have to
be in classroom at specified time.
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Online
education preferred by working professional who
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want
to upgrade their
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skills
.
For instance
, Germany
is known
for automobile
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company
, if the working professionals
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want
to learn about the automobiles, no need to go outside for it, the experts arrange the
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online
lectures through Skype to upgrade their
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skills
.

On the other hand
,
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some
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personal
consider that regular
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class room
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courses
are more beneficial
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because
it leads to interaction between
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student
and teacher. A machine can
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only
deliver lesson, it cannot figure out the problems of the learners’ whether they understood the concept or not. The instructor
easily
analyzed that
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student
understands the lecture or not by
simply
notice their facial expression. The educator solved the problems of
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students
and this is helpful for their progress. To illustrate, in a survey in India, it
is observed
that graduate are
still
interested in coaching centers to learn language computer and other
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courses
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because
they
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want
to interact with tutor to
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clear
their doubts.

To summarize
, although regular
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have emotional touch and
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online
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course
are free of
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stress
. In my opinion,
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online
learning
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programmes
are better
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because
it is accessible to everyone, even
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people
who have a full time job.

IELTS essay Some people believe online classes are more handy while others think learning in class is productive and beneficial.

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4 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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