Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

many people seek an international education through studying abroad. what advantages do you believe can be gained from studying abroad and what possible disadvantages do you see? give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The number of students who have opted to study abroad has grown steadily in the last few years. Receiving formal education in a foreign country has its own positive and negative aspects, but I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Some assume that the option of studying abroad has some drawbacks. One of the reasons for this is that receiving foreign education would cost more than getting an education in one’s homeland. Parents continue to spend more money on plane fares, living expenses, as well as tuition fees. Another reason is that students may be inexperienced and dissatisfied with the culture, environment, and language of the destination country. As a result, it might have a detrimental impact on their emotional state and academic performance. Adapting to a different environment also hinders the normal flow of learning for most, and some students might not want to resume their studies for such reasons. On the other hand, some think that learning in a foreign land brings numerous benefits to the students themselves. Firstly, by studying in another state, students would have the opportunity to learn new languages and foreign cultures. Second, students can learn how to live independently, including cleaning their rooms or doing laundry on their own. Third, they can get acquainted with people from other countries and get familiar with multicultural environments. Finally, it is a fact that in certain countries, the international graduate degree offers additional value while students are searching for occupations. In conclusion, it is irrefutable that the option of studying abroad has its advantages and disadvantages. Despite all the negatives, I agree that it has more educational benefits for students themselves, which is why students should be motivated to seek an international education. Though tuition fees may be a hindrance, several foreign scholarships are given these days.
The number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who have opted to study abroad has grown
steadily
in the last few years. Receiving formal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
aspects,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
assume that the option of studying abroad has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
drawbacks. One of the reasons for this is that receiving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
would cost more than getting an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
in one’s homeland. Parents continue to spend more money on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plane
fares, living expenses,
as well
as tuition fees. Another reason is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
may
be inexperienced
and dissatisfied with the culture, environment, and language of the destination
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
As a result
, it might have a detrimental impact on their emotional state and academic performance. Adapting to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
environment
also
hinders the normal flow of learning for most, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
might not want to resume their studies for such reasons.

On the other hand
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that learning in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
land brings numerous benefits to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
themselves.
Firstly
, by studying in another state,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
would have the opportunity to learn new languages and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
cultures. Second,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
can learn how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
independently
, including cleaning their rooms or doing laundry on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
. Third, they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
acquainted with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
from other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
familiar with multicultural environments.
Finally
, it is a fact that in certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
, the international graduate degree offers additional value while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are searching for occupations.

In conclusion
, it is irrefutable that the option of studying abroad has its advantages and disadvantages. Despite all the negatives, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that it has more educational benefits for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
themselves, which is why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
should
be motivated
to seek an international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
. Though tuition fees may be a hindrance, several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
scholarships are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
these days.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay many people seek an international education through studying abroad. what advantages do you believe can be gained from studying abroad and what possible disadvantages do you see?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts