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some people argue that public transportation should be made completely free of charge are there more advantages over disadvantage of this decision

In this era, people are busy in their life and they give preference to time rather than mode or charge of transportation. Many people believe that government transportation should be completely by without any cost. I will discuss advantages and drawbacks of this idea. On the one hand, now day most of people have busy work schedule so they prefer to their private vehicle. Owing to this, traffic rate has been picking up especially in urban areas so if government made decisions about free of cost public transportation 10: 00 public will pick public transportation as compared to private vehicle hense, rate of traffic and pollution will down. Furthermore, all category of people are able to trip on public vehicle especially penurious due to lack of money they avoid to travel in transportation in addition, government need to increase route and give facility that are all good for citizen. they will be able to travel anywhere in their country. For example in many developed cities, they have many mode of public transport they are free for their citizen specially for senior citizen and juvenile. On the other hand, there are several drawbacks Firstly, government to require lots of money. Government get fund from their transportation but if it is free of charge then they will increase taxes rate. Secondly, people are afraid to some criminal cases and some robbery. In conclusion many many people debating that public mode of transportation should be free for their people, their are more advantages than disadvantages. all category people can travel and it reduce traffic, pollution and accidents rates but citizen need to pay higher taxes.
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transportation
.
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people
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government
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should be completely by without any cost. I will discuss advantages and drawbacks of this
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people
have busy work schedule
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they prefer to their private vehicle. Owing to this, traffic
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rate
has been picking up
especially
in urban areas
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if
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government
made decisions about
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free
of cost
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public
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transportation
10: 00
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public
will pick
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public
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transportation
as compared to private vehicle
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,
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of traffic and pollution will down.

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people
are able to trip on
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public
vehicle
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government
need to increase route and give facility that are all
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citizen
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transport they are
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fund from their
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free
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criminal cases and
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should be
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all
category
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people
can travel and it
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reduce
traffic, pollution and accidents
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rates
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but
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citizen
need to pay higher taxes.
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IELTS essay some people argue that public transportation should be made completely free of charge are there more advantages over disadvantage of this decision

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
272 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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