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Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? dj2d
The argument over experimenting animals should be outlawed, however others tends to believe that important scientific discoveries can be achieved by experimenting on the animals. I firmly believe in not killing the animals in order to invent something incredible. Firstly, enormous inventions could only have happened by experimenting on animals. Scientists are in favour of this that before implementing on human beings, it should be tried on animals. In one way it makes sense and on the other hand, it does not. Discoveries made by famous folks have been successful by experimenting on the animals. Furthermore, medical professionals and other reserachers wants to save human lives and in order to do so, they put animals lives on risk. On the contrary, people does not support the idea of killing animals and a law should be enforced. By killing animals, human beings are the reasons for their extinction and endangered species. Human beings are becoming selfish and greedy that they forget they are putting someone's life on risk. Scientific discoveries can still take place without harming them. The way technology is so advanced in the 21st century, there should be a way where animals does not have to be killed. Scientists can grow the tissues in laboratories and should investigate their studies on them. There should be a strict law about protecting these species. To sum up, there can be various alternatives in order to make the finest inventions. People need to realize that by harming fauna species, they are ending someone's life.
The argument over
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animals
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,
however
others tends to believe that
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important
scientific discoveries can
be achieved
by
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experimenting
on the
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animals
. I
firmly
believe in not killing the
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animals
in order to invent something incredible.

Firstly
, enormous inventions could
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only
have happened by
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experimenting
on
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animals
. Scientists are in
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favour
of this that
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before
implementing on
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human
beings, it should
be tried
on
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animals
. In one way it
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makes
sense and
on the other hand
, it does not. Discoveries made by
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famous
folks have been successful by
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experimenting
on the
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animals
.
Furthermore
, medical professionals and other
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reserachers
wants to save
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human
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lives
and in order to do
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so
, they put
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animals
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lives
on
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risk
.

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,
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people
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does
not support the
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idea
of killing
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animals
and a law should
be enforced
. By killing
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animals
,
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human
beings are the reasons for their extinction and endangered species.
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Human
beings are becoming selfish and greedy that they forget they are putting someone's life on
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risk
. Scientific discoveries can
still
take place without harming them. The way technology is
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so
advanced in the 21st century, there should be a way where
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animals
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does
not
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have to
be killed
. Scientists can grow the tissues in laboratories and should investigate their studies on them. There should be a strict law about protecting these species.

To sum up, there can be various alternatives in order to
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make
the finest inventions.
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People
need to realize that by harming fauna species, they are ending someone's life.

IELTS essay : Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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