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Some people are worried about the rivers,lakes and seas getting polluted. Its effects both the animals and the humans. What are the causes for water pollution and its effects.

Some people are worried about the rivers, lakes and seas getting polluted. Its effects both the animals and the humans. What are the causes for water pollution and its effects. ewe5J
Pollution is the greatest threat to living beings on the planet and surprisingly human beings are the highest polluters. For those who are looking forward to keep the environment safe will be more concerned about the rivers, lakes and seas being polluted. This essay will discuss what leads to water pollution and its hazardous impact on animal and human life. One of the contributing factor is industrial and hospital wastes discarded directly to the water sources like rivers or lakes or seas. This is due to negligence of the management as well as the government who should have made sure that those waste water is treated and detoxified before discarding into the water bodies. As this will increase the water borne diseases like typhoid, cholera, gastro intestinal infections among humans and for animals it will disrupt their immune system which will give rise to numerous infections. This can be curbed by proper disposal of waste water and that too only after decontamination processes so that even if it gets emerged with other water bodies it would have less severity on flora and fauna. Another issue is that of the malpractices being performed near the river banks and sea shores by the locals as well as the visitors. One such instance was when I was passing by the Signature Bridge in Delhi, I saw people washing clothes and visitors throwing bottles and plastics into the river and nobody refrained them from doing such practises. As this will deplete the quality of water thereby increasing the morbidity rates and poor life expectancy. However, this can be prevented by conducting awareness especially in the rural areas by educating them about the diseases, harms and consequences of such practises and how they can reduce pollution by their healthy acts. After all, the more we pollute, the greater we suffer. In my view, because of the profligate use of resources, our future generation will be at risk. As human beings we can contribute alot to eradicate this issue if we think and act rationally.
Pollution is the greatest threat to living beings on the planet and
surprisingly
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human
beings are the highest polluters. For those who are looking forward to
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keep
the environment safe will be more concerned about the
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rivers
, lakes and seas
being polluted
. This essay will discuss what leads to
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water
pollution and its hazardous impact on animal and
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human
life.

One of the contributing factor is industrial and hospital wastes discarded
directly
to the
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water
sources like
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rivers
or lakes or seas. This is due to negligence of the management
as well
as the
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government
who should have made sure that those waste
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water
is treated
and detoxified
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before
discarding into the
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water
bodies. As this will increase the
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water borne
diseases like typhoid, cholera,
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gastro intestinal
infections among
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humans
and for animals it will disrupt their immune system which will give rise to numerous infections. This can
be curbed
by proper disposal of waste
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water
and that too
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only
after decontamination processes
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so
that even if it
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gets
emerged with other
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water
bodies it would have less severity on flora and fauna.

Another issue is that of the malpractices
being performed
near the
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river
banks and sea shores by the locals
as well
as the visitors. One such instance was when I was passing by the Signature Bridge in Delhi, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
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people
washing clothes and visitors throwing bottles and plastics into the
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river
and nobody refrained them from doing such
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practises
. As this will deplete the quality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
thereby increasing the morbidity rates and poor life expectancy.
However
, this can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
by conducting awareness
especially
in the rural areas by educating them about the diseases, harms and consequences of such
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practises
and how they can
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reduce
pollution by their healthy acts.
After all
, the more we pollute, the greater we suffer.

In my view,
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because
of the profligate
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use
of resources, our future generation will be at
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risk
. As
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human
beings we can contribute
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alot
to eradicate this issue if we
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think
and act
rationally
.
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IELTS essay Some people are worried about the rivers, lakes and seas getting polluted. Its effects both the animals and the humans. What are the causes for water pollution and its effects.

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