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some people are reducing their wals ,however ,many health experts say that

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The importance of walk which was always debatable has now be come more controversial with many people claimimng that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial Influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. In my opinion, . the wark appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of wal that will lead to a logical conclusion. Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason is that life is busy, routine is hectic so the trend of walk is reducing. Categorically discusiing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that transport whether public or private is easily available. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact that advance gyming has replacing the trend of walk it is complete body exersice. Moving further, it is pertinent to mention that in this sedentary lifestyle, walk is the only remedy to stay fit. Moreover walk reduces the disease maintains blood circulationand is useful for every age group. Apart from the reasons mentioned above, it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of this trend. To recapitulae, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of walk are indeed too great to ignore. Therefore, government should provide good parks in every locality.
The importance of
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walk
which was always debatable has
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now
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be
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come
more controversial with
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people
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claimimng
that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial Influence of this
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trend
has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. In my opinion
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, .
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the
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wark
appears to be more rational. This essay will
further
elaborate my views for favoring the
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positive
impact of
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wal
that will lead to a logical conclusion.

Analyzing the statement and explaining
further
, the
first
and foremost
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reason
is that life is busy, routine is hectic
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so
the
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trend
of
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walk
is reducing.
Categorically
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discusiing
, it cannot be
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ignored
that the main
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reason
behind this is that transport whether public or private is
easily
available.

Probing ahead, one of the main underlying
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reasons
stems from the fact that advance
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gyming
has replacing the
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trend
of
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walk
it is complete body
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exersice
. Moving
further
, it is pertinent to mention that in this sedentary lifestyle,
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walk
is the
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only
remedy to stay fit.
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Moreover
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walk
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reduces
the disease maintains blood
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circulationand
is useful for every age group. Apart from the
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reasons
mentioned above, it can be
clearly
stated why
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many
are in
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favour
of this
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trend
. To
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recapitulae
, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of
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walk
are
indeed
too great to
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ignore
.
Therefore
,
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government
should provide
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good
parks in every locality.
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IELTS essay some people are reducing their wals, however, many health experts say that

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  American English
3 paragraphs
237 words
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