Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people are reducing their walks, however many health experts say that it is not good. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people are reducing their walks, however many health experts say that it is not good. gYEw7

THE BEST WAT TO KEEEP YOURSELF HEALTHY IS WALKING. HOWEVER, MANY EXPERSTS NOTICED DOWNFALL IN WALKS WHICH IS NOT A GREAT SIGN. IN MY OPINION WALK APPEARS TO BE VITAL. THIS ESSAY WILL ELABORATE MY VIEWS ON POSITIVE IMPACT OF STROLING MOREOVER LEADS TO LOGICAL CONCLUSION IN OUR BUSY LIFE EVERYONE IS IN RUSH MOREOVER ALL NEED TO REACH THEIR DESTINATION IN TIME. OUR modern world is so diverse which automatically eliminates walking system, for instance if anybody want to travel to office he/she might have to ride a bike or other vehicle as distance between house and office is not walkable. On the other hand air is also polluted due to many factors such as vehicles, factories and many more which prohibits pedestrian. Although, I believe to keep yourself healthy walking is must, it keeps our body weight in correct scale, maintains blood pressure, keeps disease. We should make people aware about benefits of being healthy by social media, camps, advertisement and by other methods too. many experts also claim concluded the same, we should plant more-and-more trees that will lead to improve air quality index which will make everyone motivated to go out and for short distances avoid use to transportation. To conclude, according to argument above mentioned one will reach to a conclusion that walking has many benefits and we should opt walking over transportation to keep our body fit and healthy.

THE BEST Possible spelling mistake found.WasAtWhatWaitWayWant
WAT
 TO Possible spelling mistake found.KeepKE EEP
KEEEP
 YOURSELF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
HEALTHY
 IS WALKING. HOWEVER
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
MANY
Possible spelling mistake found.Experts
EXPERSTS
 NOTICED DOWNFALL IN WALKS WHICH IS NOT A GREAT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
SIGN
. IN MY OPINION WALK APPEARS TO BE VITAL. THIS ESSAY WILL ELABORATE MY VIEWS ON This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
POSITIVE
 IMPACT OF Possible spelling mistake found.StrokingStrollingStrobing
STROLING
MOREOVER
 LEADS TO LOGICAL Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphCONCLUSION.CONCLUSION!CONCLUSION?CONCLUSION:CONCLUSION,CONCLUSION;
CONCLUSION


IN OUR BUSY LIFE EVERYONE IS IN RUSH MOREOVER
 ALL NEED TO REACH THEIR DESTINATION IN TIME. OUR modern world is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 diverse which automatically
 eliminates walking system, for instance
 if anybody The pronoun 'anybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".wantswanted
want
 to travel to office he/she might This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 ride a bike or other vehicle as distance between This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and office is not walkable. On the other hand
 air is also
 polluted due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 factors such as vehicles, factories and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more which prohibits pedestrian. Although, I believe to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreservecontrolenjoymanagecarryplace
keep
 yourself You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
 walking is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
, it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreservecontrolenjoymanagecarryplace
keeps
 our body weight in correct scale, maintains blood pressure, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreservecontrolenjoymanagecarryplace
keeps
 disease. We should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 aware about benefits of being You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
 by social media, camps, advertisement and by other methods too. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMany
many
 experts also
 claim concluded the same, we should plant more-and-more trees that will lead to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 air quality index which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 everyone motivated to go out and for short distances avoid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to transportation. To conclude
, according to argument above mentioned one will reach to a conclusion that walking has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).benefits, and
benefits and
 we should opt walking over transportation to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreservecontrolenjoymanagecarryplace
keep
 our body fit and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroustoughnormalathletichealthfulhearty
healthy
. 