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Some people are interested in international news, others prefer watching national news.

Some people are interested in international news, others prefer watching national news. R5PAo
Wheter to watch national or international news has become a controversial issue. A number of individuals believe that national news more effective than international news, however, others give the priority to international news. This essay intends to delve into both sides of the statement in depth. I however, personally opine that these are equally vital and it is important to consider same approach. On the one hand, a section of society is in favour of getting knowledge about the surrounding region or topics of national interests. National new such as political, national interests, publich interests of local government are something that motivates them to learn more about them. For example, most of elderly people in local community interested in local news and they look through different information recources in order to get a lot of knowledge. On the other hand, a major part of the community looks forward global news. They might be thinking these have an extensive impact on the whole universe. I am favor of reading international news because according to my view people can acquire a lot of detailed information while reading global news. For instance, There are some news that we barely come across while reading local news, however this news is important for each individuals. We can get detailed information from global news about global warming, air pollutioning, and other serious problems. Which is affecting every corener of the world. Even a small child should be aware about this hazardous problems beacuse they should rising issues whole world. In a conclusion, although people have their individual opinion abou this argument however, i think they should also pay attention international news and world.
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Wheter
to
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watch
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national
or
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international
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news
has become a controversial issue. A number of individuals believe that
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national
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news
more effective than
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international
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news
,
however
, others give the priority to
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international
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news
. This essay intends to delve into both sides of the statement in depth. I
however
,
personally
opine that these are
equally
vital and it is
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important
to consider same approach. On the one hand, a section of society is in
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favour
of getting knowledge about the surrounding region or topics of
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national
interests.
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National
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new
such as political,
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national
interests,
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publich
interests of
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local
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government
are something that motivates them to learn more about them.
For example
, most of elderly
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people
in
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local
community interested in
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local
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news and
they look through
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different
information
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recources
in order to
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get
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a lot of
knowledge.
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, a major part of the community looks forward
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global
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news
. They might be thinking these have an extensive impact
on the whole
universe. I am favor of reading
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international
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news
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because
according to my view
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people
can acquire
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a lot of
detailed information while reading
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global
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news
.
For instance
, There are
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some
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news
that we
barely
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come
across while reading
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local
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news
,
however
this
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news
is
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important
for each
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individuals
. We can
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get
detailed information from
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global
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news
about
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global
warming, air
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pollutioning
, and other serious problems.
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Which
is affecting every
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corener
of the world. Even a
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small
child should be aware about this hazardous problems
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beacuse
they should
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rising
issues whole world. In a conclusion, although
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people
have their individual opinion
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abou this
argument
however
,
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i
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think
they should
also
pay attention
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international
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news
and world.
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IELTS essay Some people are interested in international news, others prefer watching national news.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
277 words
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