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Some people agrue that clonning of human being should not be allowed rather it should be totally banned do you agree or disagree

Some people agrue that clonning of human being should not be allowed rather it should be totally banned XneXP
There are some who opine that human cloning is ethically wrong and should be prohibited. This means that cloning of humans can deteriorate the uniqueness, individuality and personal identity. In this essay, I am full in accord with this nation and shall fortify it with feasible reasons. The first and perhaps the most important point seems to be that cloning of homo sapiens should be banned as it is irresponsible to human beings until cloning is perfected. By this i mean that cloned human would probably face serious complications and ultimately terminate some health issues. For instance, in French scientists held an experimental studies on two months old infant, cloned from genetic material taken from the embryo. The offspring seemed to develop normally over a period of month. By the end of the second month rapid depelation of red and white blood cells detected which deteriorate the condition by causing blood and heart problems. Thus, process of human cloning can results in increasing risk of serious life threatening diseases and shortened lifespan. On the other hand, human cloning has myraid of beneficial response. Pros of the cloning Include infertility, organ replacement, genetic research, selective human traits, advance human development and So on. This that doctors are being able to create tissue and organ that can use when needed. Cloning of entire person can be eliminated through replacating needed parts only in laboratories. For example, after the discovery of the double helix structure of DNA the idea of mapping the project termed as human genome has taken place, which has a goal to identify base pairs of DNA and mapping genes of humans genome in order to replicate them. I concede that both the paragraphs have significant importance and logic; however, I more agree with the notion that human cloning should be prohibited as the risk associated with cloning in Human introduce very high likehood of loss of life. This proces is considered ethically wrong and even several nations promoted laws regarding human cloning and it's legality. I think that cloning interferes with God's role as creators as it suppress natural course of evaluation and misused by hostile people. In conclusion, from the aformentioned points it is aptly clear that cloning should be restricted as it is termed as violation of human rights and human dignity.
There are
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some
who opine that
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human
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cloning
is
ethically
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wrong
and should
be prohibited
. This means that
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cloning
of
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humans
can deteriorate the uniqueness, individuality and personal identity. In this essay, I am full in accord with this nation and shall fortify it with feasible reasons. The
first
and perhaps the most
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important
point seems to be that
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cloning
of homo sapiens should
be banned
as it is irresponsible to
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human
beings until
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cloning
is perfected
. By this
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i
mean that cloned
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human
would
probably
face serious complications and
ultimately
terminate
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some
health issues.
For instance
, in French scientists held an experimental
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studies
on two months
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old
infant, cloned from genetic material taken from the embryo. The offspring seemed to develop
normally
over a period of month. By the
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end
of the second month rapid
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depelation
of red and white blood cells detected which deteriorate the condition by causing blood and heart problems.
Thus
, process of
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human
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cloning
can results in increasing
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risk
of serious life threatening diseases and shortened lifespan.
On the other hand
,
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human
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cloning
has
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myraid
of beneficial response. Pros of the
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cloning
Include infertility, organ replacement, genetic research, selective
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human
traits, advance
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human
development and
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So
on. This that doctors are being able to create tissue and organ that can
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use
when needed.
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Cloning
of entire person can
be eliminated
through
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replacating
needed parts
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only
in laboratories.
For example
, after the discovery of the double helix structure of DNA the
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idea
of mapping the project termed as
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human
genome has taken place, which has a goal to identify base pairs of DNA and mapping genes of
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humans
genome in order to replicate them. I concede that both the paragraphs have significant importance and logic;
however
, I more
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agree
with the notion that
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human
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cloning
should
be prohibited
as the
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risk
associated with
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cloning
in
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Human
introduce
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very
high
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likehood
of loss of life. This
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proces
is considered
ethically
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wrong
and even several nations promoted laws regarding
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human
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cloning
and it's legality. I
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think
that
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cloning
interferes with God's role as creators as it suppress natural course of evaluation and misused by hostile
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people
.
In conclusion
, from the
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aformentioned
points it is
aptly
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clear
that
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cloning
should
be restricted
as it
is termed
as violation of
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human
rights and
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human
dignity.
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IELTS essay Some people agrue that clonning of human being should not be allowed rather it should be totally banned

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