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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. v.11

Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. v. 11
One of the most pressing issues in modern society is a dying sentence for extreme offenders. It is often said that a departure sentence is necessary to keep the security system efficiency in the society, while, others oppose it because this is an unethical judgment. In this easy, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this contentious phenomenon and provide my own perspective which is that any anti-social activity can be reduced only by putting the death sentence. From an overall perspective, there are a number of disadvantages of death penalties. Perhaps the main disadvantage is that we have no rights to kill other humans. Right to live is the basic right of any human being, and no one can infringe this right, irrespective of the person’s deeds. Moreover, innocent people can face wrongful execution. Such unfair sentences take away the lives of innocent people and make other citizens lose faith in law and justice. And besides, sometimes criminals repent of their acts. In this case, they should be given a second chance to improve themselves. Generally speaking, there is a wide range of advantages, why people believe that longer imprisonment is really necessary to lessen the crime rates. Perhaps the main reason why people in favour of this trend is, that it will act as a warning by law that any antisocial and offence acts are intolerable and unacceptable. For instance, life imprisonment and capital punishment are pre-planned for murders and horrible assault eases. This will make people think several times before committing to a crime. In addition, longer prison will assure the community that bestiality will receive the highest degree of punishments and never be roamed in the public freely which will make the community free from offence. As a consequence, it ensures the less threat to the local from these anti-social elements. For example, a recent survey conducted in Dhaka, and it's clearly shown that awarding a longer judgment of 16 years for sexual assault, lead to decrease the sexual harassment cases. In conclusion, this is a topic which raises some questions in contemporary life. Having considered both sides of the viewpoints I would argue that putting a dying penalty will make our society free from extreme offences. However, if we don't put the death penalty on violent crimes, people will engage in themselves with the world of crime.
One of the most pressing issues in modern society is a dying sentence for extreme offenders. It is
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often
said that a departure sentence is necessary to
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keep
the security system efficiency in the society, while, others oppose it
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because
this is an unethical judgment. In this easy, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this contentious phenomenon and provide my
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own
perspective which is that any anti-social activity can be
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reduced
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only
by putting the death sentence.

From an
overall
perspective, there are a number of disadvantages of death penalties. Perhaps the main disadvantage is that we have no
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rights
to kill other humans.
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Right
to
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live
is the basic
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right
of any human being, and no one can infringe this
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right
, irrespective of the person’s deeds.
Moreover
, innocent
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people
can face wrongful execution. Such unfair sentences take away the
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lives
of innocent
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people
and
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make
other citizens lose faith in law and justice. And
besides
,
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sometimes
criminals repent of their acts.
In this case
, they should be
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given
a second chance to
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improve
themselves.

Generally
speaking, there is a wide range of advantages, why
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people
believe that longer imprisonment is
really
necessary to lessen the
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crime
rates. Perhaps the main reason why
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people
in
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favour
of this trend is, that it will act as a warning by law that any antisocial and
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offence
acts are intolerable and unacceptable.
For instance
, life imprisonment and capital punishment are
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pre-planned
for murders and horrible assault
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eases
. This will
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make
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people
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think
several times
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before
committing to a
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crime
.
In addition
, longer prison will assure the community that bestiality will receive the highest degree of punishments and never
be roamed
in the public
freely
which will
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make
the community free from
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offence
. As a consequence, it ensures the less threat to the local from these anti-social elements.
For example
, a recent survey conducted in Dhaka, and it's
clearly
shown that awarding a longer judgment of 16 years for sexual assault, lead to decrease the sexual harassment cases.

In conclusion
, this is a topic which raises
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some
questions in contemporary life. Having considered both sides of the viewpoints I would argue that putting a dying penalty will
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make
our society free from extreme
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offences
.
However
, if we don't put the death penalty on violent
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crimes
,
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people
will engage in themselves with the world of
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crime
.
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IELTS essay Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion. v. 11

Essay
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