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Some parents choose homeschooling for their children. Do you agree or disagree.

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A numbet of people try to choose a school for their children. For the personal oipion I agree this choice and I list the reasons of my agreement. In fact, schools are a major step for children which can supply the children's further education. There is no one who knows better than parents what the child's interests. On this account, parents are the best people to select the educational place. They try to select a school thinkinf of wisely. They pay attention to both interests and abilities of their children. Moreover, they also consider the former results of both students and teachers' achievments of the place. For one more reason, since parents are main breadwinners they consider the journer house school to school, sport and other activity facilities. They choose the best place for their child can enhance the knowledge. On the other hand, some parents put the choise to their children, They say they should do the choice as it is the first path for their future. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is the best option that parents choose the right place to study for their children.
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this choice and I list the reasons of my agreement.

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are a major step for
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children
which can supply the children's
further
education. There is no one who knows better than
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what the child's interests. On this account,
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parents
are the best
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to select the educational place. They try to select a
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wisely
. They pay attention to both interests and abilities of their
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.
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achievments
of the place.

For one more reason, since
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are main breadwinners they consider the
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to
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, sport and other activity facilities. They choose the best place for their child can enhance the knowledge.

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,
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put the
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, They say they should do the choice as it is the
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In conclusion
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choose the right place to study for their
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IELTS essay Some parents choose homeschooling for their children.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
190 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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