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Climate change`s effect on the earth steps neede to be taken by government

Climate change`s effect on the earth steps neede to be taken by government GNW9j
In an recent study given by ipcc(international panel on climate change) it is predicted that global temperatures are on the rise and could increase another 1. 5 degrees by the end of 20 th century. It is an alarming situation for all the countries and immediate attention is required to mitigate the detrimental effects of the climate change. Moreover, various factors effecting the climate change are pollution, greenhouse gases, global warming etc. . . . To be frank one needs to be strictly aware of this particular situation and the governments all over the world must strictly adopt some norms regarding companies, vehicles etc. As said by Mahatma gandhi, Earth provides resources to everyone`s needs but not greeds there has to be solution to this longlasting issue. Mostly effected by the climate change are the marine animals, birds, wild animals which struggle to
In
an
recent study
given
by
ipcc
(international panel on
climate
change)
it
is predicted
that global temperatures are on the rise and could increase another 1. 5 degrees by the
end
of
20 th
century. It is an alarming situation for all the countries and immediate attention
is required
to mitigate the detrimental effects of the
climate
change
.
Moreover
, various factors effecting the
climate
change
are pollution, greenhouse gases, global warming etc.
.
.
.
To be frank one needs to be
strictly
aware of this particular situation and the
governments
all over the world
must
strictly
adopt
some
norms regarding
companies
, vehicles etc. As said by Mahatma
gandhi
, Earth provides resources to
everyone`s
needs
but
not
greeds
there
has to
be solution to this
longlasting
issue.
Mostly
effected by the
climate
change
are the marine animals, birds, wild animals which struggle
to
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IELTS essay Climate change`s effect on the earth steps neede to be taken by government

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  American English
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