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Positives and negatives social media

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According to Thomas jefferson information is the new currency of democracy. Whereas, information representatives like newspapers, social media play an significant role in functioning of a country. Social media or popularly known as yellow media has detrimental responsibility to make people assure of different prospectives like schemes started by the government or benifical programmes. Whether good or bad, media needs to perform its righteous works. It needs to keep people updated daily and must not abhor against anyone who may be a corrupt politician or a corporate criminal. Main advantage of social media is that news in any part of the world could be visualised from our sources such as mobiles and telivisons. When it comes to disadvantages fake news might be a common issue pertaining in this generation. Also some individuals urge social media to use it for their personal benefits.
According to Thomas
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information is the new currency of democracy. Whereas, information representatives like newspapers,
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popularly
known as yellow
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media
has detrimental responsibility to
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make
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people
assure of
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different
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prospectives
like schemes
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started
by the
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government
or
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benifical
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programmes
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good
or
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bad
,
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needs to perform its righteous works. It needs to
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keep
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people
updated daily and
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must
not abhor against anyone who may be a corrupt politician or a corporate criminal. Main advantage of
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social
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media
is that news in any part of the world could be
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visualised
from our sources such as mobiles and
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telivisons
.
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to disadvantages fake news might be a common issue pertaining in this generation.
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Also
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individuals urge
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to
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use
it for their personal benefits.

IELTS essay Positives and negatives social media

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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