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Some parents are sending their children to another country for education. What are the reasons of this trend? Does it have any negative effects on children?

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In the modern era, education is equitably distributed for everyone. More and more children are being spent to foreign countries to study and live there. Besides the benefits of living and studying abroad, there still have a lot of drawbacks. Nowadays, many parents send their children to studyabroad and this make children expedient to new environment and improve their language skill. Studying in new country is the best way for learn new language and culture so it’s very convenient for their future if they want to live and work in that country. Moreover, sending children to studying university abroad is the first step for their success in the future. The reason for that is learning in foreign country encourage them to focus more on their language skill and it’s also help children feel more confident and be more sociable.
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equitably
distributed for everyone. More and more
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children
are
being spent
to foreign
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countries
to study and
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live
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a lot of
drawbacks. Nowadays,
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parents
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their
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children
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studyabroad
and this
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make
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children
expedient to new environment and
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improve
their language
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skill
. Studying in new
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country
is the best way for learn new language and culture
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so
it’s
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very
convenient for their future if they want to
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live
and work in that
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country
.
Moreover
, sending
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children
to studying university abroad is the
first
step for their success in the future. The reason for
that is
learning in foreign
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country
encourage them to focus more on their language
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skill
and it’s
also
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help
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children
feel more confident and be more sociable.
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IELTS essay Some parents are sending their children to another country for education. What are the reasons of this trend? Does it have any negative effects on children?

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139 words
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