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people say to get married before 30, do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays, couples generally prefer to hook up the ties after persuing leave-in relationship with each other. However our ansisters suggests to get married before the age of 30, which is totally right as per their prespective. There are various biological factor behind the logic to get hitched up before getting aged. On the other hand couples don't want to get engagged because they have various other goals in their life to achieve and and become stable as a personality. Let's take my instance, I was suggested to get married at the age of 25 with my boyfriend. Certainly I was not ready for the same as I wanted to settal down first before taking our relationship one step forward. My boyfriend was 4 years older then me. But due to insist of my parrents we had a leavein relation for 6 months followed by our marriage life which was before we reach 30. It was benificial decission for both of us for future planning. So my pefrence will incline towards getting married before 30.
Nowadays, couples
generally
prefer to hook up the ties after
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persuing
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leave
-in relationship with each other.
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However
our
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ansisters
suggests to
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get
married
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before
the age of 30, which is
totally
right as per their
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prespective
. There are various biological
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factor
behind the logic to
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get
hitched up
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before
getting aged.

On the other hand
couples don't want to
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get
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engagged
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because
they have various other goals in their life to achieve
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and and
become stable as a personality.

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Let
's take my instance, I
was suggested
to
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get
married at the age of 25 with my boyfriend.
Certainly
I was not ready for the same as I wanted to
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settal
down
first
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before
taking our relationship one step forward. My boyfriend was 4 years
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older then
me.
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But
due to insist of my
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parrents
we had a
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leavein
relation for 6 months followed by our marriage life which was
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before
we reach 30. It was
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benificial
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decission
for both of us for future planning.

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So
my
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pefrence
will incline towards getting married
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before
30.

IELTS essay people say to get married before 30,

Essay
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4 paragraphs
174 words
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