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Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone

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I will state my opinion about loneless and support it with appropriate arguments and exampled. Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends and use every single minute to be with them. Others have negative attitude, theu like to spend time with themselves. Friends are among those individuals who can influence our lives through spending time together and sharing our secrets with them. Nowadays some people may think that it would be better to be alone instead of having different, various friends. I disagree and strongly believe that we should have friends. For example my mates keep me from feeling lonely. It is fun to go the movies, shopping or in the central park. They always keep me company and to talk with them are enjoyable. Friends make our lives richer.
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and support it with appropriate arguments and exampled.
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prefer to spend most of their time with
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friends
and
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use
every single minute to be with them. Others have
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negative
attitude,
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like to spend time with themselves.
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Friends
are among those individuals who can influence our
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lives
through spending time together and sharing our secrets with them. Nowadays
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some
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people
may
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think
that it would be better to be alone
instead
of having
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different
, various
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friends
. I disagree and
strongly
believe that we should have
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friends
.
For example
my mates
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keep
me from feeling lonely. It is fun to go the movies, shopping or in the
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central park
. They always
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keep
me
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company
and to talk with them are enjoyable.
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Friends
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make
our
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lives
richer.

IELTS essay Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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