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Some organizations and companies say older people are better as leaders while some say young people are better as leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some organizations and companies say older people are better as leaders while some say young people are better as leader. 0nlxB
Now a day, In this modern world, both young and elderly director handle and manage their organization very well. But both have different plan, ideas and ability to run any organization therefor I agree as much as disagree with given statement and also explain in forthcoming paragraph. Elderly director have vast amount of knowledge and experience to run the organization. For instance, they manage their company well in any crisis or money loss situation whereas young man can’t handle it and therefor many business fails which is run by the young enterpuner. Moreover, experienced people handle their manpower expertly and they know what the employee need, this is the main reason for success of any organization. In contrast, young director have innovative idea, passion and energy to run the organization, risk taking ability is the main feature young have for Quick growth of company. For instance, now a day many young people success due to their risk taking ability For example ritesh agrwal who run the a big organization OYO worth of 8 billion dollar in young age. No doubt, many has fail and many has succeed but young people very well know about what a new generation demand. Furthermore, Despite have all this knowledge young director required guidance from the experienced once to tackle and handle the big problem. In conclusion, Elderly and young director have different ability to run organization but both required potential to run or lead big organization or company.
Now
a day, In this modern world, both
young
and elderly
director
handle
and manage their
organization
very
well.
But
both have
different
plan,
ideas
and
ability
to
run
any
organization
therefor I
agree
as much as disagree with
given
statement and
also
explain
in forthcoming paragraph.

Elderly
director
have vast amount of knowledge and experience to
run
the
organization
.
For instance
, they manage their
company
well in any crisis or money loss situation whereas
young
man
can’t
handle
it and therefor
many
business fails which is
run
by the
young
enterpuner
.

Moreover
, experienced
people
handle
their manpower
expertly and
they know what the employee need, this is the main reason for success of any organization.

In contrast
,
young
director
have innovative
idea
, passion and energy to
run
the
organization
,
risk
taking
ability
is the main feature
young
have for Quick growth of
company
.
For instance
,
now
a day
many
young
people
success due to their
risk
taking
ability
For example
ritesh
agrwal
who
run
the a
big
organization
OYO
worth of 8 billion
dollar
in
young
age. No doubt,
many
has fail and
many
has
succeed
but
young
people
very
well know about what a new generation demand.

Furthermore
, Despite have all this knowledge
young
director
required guidance from the experienced once to tackle and
handle
the
big
problem.

In conclusion
, Elderly and
young
director
have
different
ability
to
run
organization
but
both required potential to
run
or lead
big
organization
or
company
.
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IELTS essay Some organizations and companies say older people are better as leaders while some say young people are better as leader.

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