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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

The outside appearance can be very important to some people and some situations especially in first-time meetings because it has always been said that the first impression is relevant but it doesn't mean that you will be able to tell everything about someone by the way they dress. In my opinion, people can dress whenever they want to because they have the right to do so, but sometimes it also depends on time and place. I think that dress codes shouldn't be too strict mostly on daily workdays but you should also dress smartly on occasions such as big meetings or conferences with particular people. You would want to look professional and put together to gain people's trust with work. But then again, I agree with valuing quality work above appearance and think that both parts should be done equally. Clothes can really affect the way you handle work, for example, if you wear uncomfortable clothes it can irritate you and interrupt you with your tasks as you are always thinking about how uncomfy your clothes are and wish to change them. In contrast, if you are wearing comfortable but appropriate clothes it will allow your work to flow better, not only that, but gives you a peaceful mind allowing you to focus on what you are doing better rather than thinking about something else. In conclusion, the outside appearance plays an important part but should not be taken too seriously, at the same time should not be taken loosely as well. Appropriateness is the key.
The outside appearance can be
very
important
to
some
people
and
some
situations
especially
in
first
-time meetings
because
it has always
been said
that the
first
impression is relevant
but
it doesn't mean that you will be able to
tell
everything about someone by the way they dress.

In my opinion,
people
can dress whenever they want to
because
they have the right to do
so
,
but
sometimes
it
also
depends on time and place. I
think
that dress codes shouldn't be too strict
mostly
on daily workdays
but
you should
also
dress
smartly
on occasions such as
big
meetings or conferences with particular
people
. You would want to look professional and put together to gain
people
's trust with
work
.
But
then again, I
agree
with valuing quality
work
above appearance and
think
that both parts should
be done
equally
.
Clothes
can
really
affect the way you handle
work
,
for example
, if you wear uncomfortable
clothes
it can irritate you and interrupt you with your tasks as you are always thinking about how uncomfy your
clothes
are and wish to
change
them.
In contrast
, if you are wearing comfortable
but
appropriate
clothes
it will
allow
your
work
to flow better, not
only
that,
but
gives you a peaceful mind allowing you to focus on what you are doing better
rather
than thinking about something else.

In conclusion
, the outside appearance plays an
important
part
but
should not
be taken
too
seriously
, at the same time should not
be taken
loosely
as well
. Appropriateness is the key.
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IELTS essay Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
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