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Some of the ways dating and marriage

Some of the ways dating and marriage PR29j
When my parents met each other, at that time there was no internet and social media applications, they saw each other at the party and after their parents let to have a date, they got to know each other and finally got married but at this time, with social media application, people easily find each other and make a connection with this applications and maybe after a while, they break down the relationship and find another one.
When my parents met each
other
, at that time there was no internet and social media applications, they
saw
each
other
at the party and after their parents
let
to have a date, they
got
to know each
other
and
finally
got
married
but
at this time, with social media application,
people
easily
find each
other
and
make
a connection with
this
applications and maybe after a while, they break down the relationship and find another one.
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IELTS essay Some of the ways dating and marriage

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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