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Some measures to protect the environment tourist

Some measures to protect the environment tourist 0EnqG
However, tourism also brings up some negative effects, especially environmental pollution. Thus, tourist sites need to manage and issue regulations on the protection of the tourist environment. In addition, travelers need to take care of the tourist area environment. For example, instead of using plastic bottles, travelers should use flasks. Or else, if you have food outside, you should buy enough and use it out
However
, tourism
also
brings up
some
negative
effects,
especially
environmental pollution.
Thus
, tourist sites need to manage and issue regulations on the protection of the tourist environment.
In addition
, travelers need to take care of the tourist area environment.
For example
,
instead
of using plastic bottles, travelers should
use
flasks. Or else, if you have food outside, you should
buy
enough
and
use
it
out
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IELTS essay Some measures to protect the environment tourist

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
64 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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