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Some individuals opine that every houses in town should have similar house style. Few believes that local authorities should provide freedom to make houses as individuals want. Give your opinion on it.

Some individuals opine that every houses in town should have similar house style. Few believes that local authorities should provide freedom to make houses as individuals want. Give your opinion on it. d9VyP
People have split opinions on style of making houses. Few individuals believe that every houses should have same style and new houses should copy the style of older houses, while other states that local bodies should allow people to make houses as they want. I opine with latter view and both the viewpoints along with my opinion are explained in ensuing paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons behind making houses in similars Patterns. First and foremost, if every individuals house looks similar than it might be helpful to get rid from the partiality between rich and poor. Consequently, People's mentality will be change and it can assist to fulfil every individuals rights. Besides this, by making every house in same style they can improve air circulation and sun light, because big houses becomes hurdle for them and they can not go in small houses. Also, by this they can save electricity and local authorities can get income from it. For instance, in Switzerland, every house has similar pattern they saves electricity which they sells to other neighbour countries and boosts theis economy. on the other, every person has right to build house as per his likes. It will become like shatching of their own rights. Firstly, every one has different earnings and it is like desire to make their dream house. Moreover, by making distinct type of houses somehow it becomes identity and also it makes easy to find out home. To exemplify, if parson visits to their lovely ones and every house has similar pattern in that town then it is complex to find out. To conclude, I think the both sides are right at some place. However, enforcement from local authorities to make same hauses as older houses is like snatcging their freedom. In my opinion, everyone should have right to make house as per they want.
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. Few individuals believe that every
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should have same
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style
and new
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should copy the
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style
of older
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houses
, while other states that local bodies should
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allow
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people
to
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make
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houses
as they want. I opine with latter view and both the viewpoints along with my opinion are
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explained
in ensuing paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons behind making
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houses
in
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similars
Patterns.
First
and foremost, if every individuals
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house
looks
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similar
than it might be helpful to
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get
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the partiality between rich and poor.
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,
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People
's mentality will be
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change
and it can assist to fulfil every individuals
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rights
.
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this, by making every
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house
in same
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they can
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improve
air circulation and sun light,
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big
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becomes hurdle for
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them and
they can not go in
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houses
.
Also
, by this they can save electricity and local authorities can
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get
income from it.
For instance
, in Switzerland, every
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house
has
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similar
pattern they
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saves
electricity which they
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sells
to other
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countries and boosts
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on
the other, every person has
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to build
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house
as per his likes. It will become
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like shatching
of their
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.
Firstly
, every one has
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earnings and it is like desire to
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make
their dream
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house
.
Moreover
, by making distinct type of
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houses
somehow it becomes identity and
also
it
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makes
easy to find out home. To exemplify, if parson visits to their lovely ones and every
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house
has
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similar
pattern in that town then it is complex to find out.

To conclude
, I
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the both sides are
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at
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However
, enforcement from local authorities to
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same
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as older
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houses
is like
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snatcging
their freedom. In my opinion, everyone should have
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right
to
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make
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house
as per they want.
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IELTS essay Some individuals opine that every houses in town should have similar house style. Few believes that local authorities should provide freedom to make houses as individuals want. Give your opinion on it.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
311 words
5.5
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