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plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021.

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There are plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021. Overall, the noticeable changes can be seen as there was a fountain, stage for musicians has been changed to the rose garden covered with 4 chairs and amphitheatre for concerts. In the new plan, the seats in the near east, west, and east and west corner of the north entrance has been removed. And the rose garden in the near east replaced by the cafe, also east of rose garden that is a pond for plants replaced with children's play area. The seats in the vicinity west, corner west and north-east are removed from the south entrance. The rose garden in the near west removed, also east of the entrance glasshouse is replaced with water feature. The amphitheatre for concerts is put in place of the stage for musicians in south of rose garden which is west of north garden and rose garden surrounded with removed seats in north, south, east, and west in the centre of the Grange Park.
There are plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021.

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seen
as there was a fountain, stage for musicians has been
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to the
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rose
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garden
covered with 4 chairs and
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amphitheatre
for concerts.

In the new plan, the seats in the near east, west, and east and west corner of the north entrance has been
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removed
. And the
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rose
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garden
in the near east replaced by the
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cafe
,
also
east of
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rose
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garden
that is
a pond for plants replaced with children's play area. The seats in the vicinity west, corner west and north-east are
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removed
from the south entrance. The
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rose
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garden
in the near west
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removed
,
also
east of the entrance glasshouse
is replaced
with water feature.

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The
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amphitheatre
for concerts
is put
in place of the stage for musicians in south of
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rose
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garden
which is west of north
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garden
and
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rose
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garden
surrounded with
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removed
seats in north, south, east, and west in the
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centre
of the Grange Park.
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IELTS essay plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
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