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plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021.

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There are plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021. Overall, the noticeable changes can be seen as there was a fountain, stage for musicians has been changed to the rose garden covered with 4 chairs and amphitheatre for concerts. In the new plan, the seats in the near east, west, and east and west corner of the north entrance has been removed. And the rose garden in the near east replaced by the cafe, also east of rose garden that is a pond for plants replaced with children's play area. The seats in the vicinity west, corner west and north-east are removed from the south entrance. The rose garden in the near west removed, also east of the entrance glasshouse is replaced with water feature. The amphitheatre for concerts is put in place of the stage for musicians in south of rose garden which is west of north garden and rose garden surrounded with removed seats in north, south, east, and west in the centre of the Grange Park.

There are plans of the same public park, which depicts the difference in the same public park from 1920 to 2021.

Overall
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changes
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seen
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changed
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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garden
 covered with 4 chairs and Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts.

In the new plan, the seats in the near east, west, and east and west corner of the north entrance has been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetachedevacuated
removed
. And the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the near east replaced by the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, also
 east of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
that is
 a pond for plants replaced with children's play area. The seats in the vicinity west, corner west and north-east are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetachedevacuated
removed
 from the south entrance. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the near west You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetachedevacuated
removed
, also
 east of the entrance glasshouse is replaced
 with water feature.

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The
Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts is put
 in place of the stage for musicians in south of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 which is west of north You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 surrounded with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetachedevacuated
removed
 seats in north, south, east, and west in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the Grange Park. 