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Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. do you agree or disagree

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Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. In my opinion, I personally disagree with this opinion because it could lead to many disadvantages for any country's progress, so people should not limit themselves to locally made things. The essay will further discuss points with appropriate examples to demonstrate and elaborate on the argument in the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, the most indispensable fact, people could get anything even it is not available in their own country because it is the most common situation countries are limited with their geographical barriers and unable to impart raw materials for all type of productions. For example, Canada's climate does not allow to grow of cotton that's why the country imports clothes from other nations. Therefore, it is concluded that buying products from other land provide them with the variety even it is not available in their local places. Furthermore, importing things from other nations put a spectacular and significant impact on the country's economy because globalization makes it "a piece of cake" for all nations to trade and robust their economies. When an exporter country exports; it's stock to the host country and the exporter has to pay a decent amount as GST to the importer country, which amounts counted as an income source. For instance, Australia exports wine to China and also paying the GST on it; this trade generates income for the Chinese economy. If people in China would stop to buy Australian wine, could create a hugely detrimental impact on their economy. Because it would create a massive economic impact on their country, they should also buy foreign commodities. In conclusion, whereas buying things, which made from other countries, impart us the variety, might not accessible locally, but also plays a crucial role to build a healthy economical structure for our countries; nevertheless, people should buy locally made products but also keep buying international products as well.
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rather
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products
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personally
disagree with this opinion
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it could lead to
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disadvantages for any country's progress,
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so
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people
should not limit themselves to
locally
made things. The essay will
further
discuss points with appropriate examples to demonstrate and elaborate on the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, the most indispensable fact,
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people
could
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get
anything even it is not available in their
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own
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country
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because
it is the most common situation
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countries
are limited
with their geographical barriers and unable to impart raw materials for all type of productions.
For example
, Canada's climate does not
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allow
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to grow
of cotton that's why the
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country
imports clothes from
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other
nations.
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, it
is concluded
that buying
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products
from
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land provide them with the variety even it is not available in their local places.

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, importing things from
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other
nations put a spectacular and significant impact on the country's
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economy
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because
globalization
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makes
it
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a piece of cake
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"
for all nations to trade and robust their
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economies
. When an exporter
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country
exports; it's stock to the host
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country
and the exporter
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has to
pay a decent amount as GST to the importer
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country
, which amounts counted as an income source.
For instance
, Australia exports wine to China and
also
paying the GST on it; this trade generates income for the Chinese
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economy
. If
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people
in China would
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stop
to
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buy
Australian wine, could create a
hugely
detrimental impact on their
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economy
.
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Because
it would create a massive economic impact on their
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country
, they should
also
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buy
foreign commodities.

In conclusion
, whereas buying things, which made from
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other
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countries
, impart us the variety, might not accessible
locally
,
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but
also
plays a crucial role to build a healthy
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economical
structure for our
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countries
;
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,
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people
should
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buy
locally
made
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products
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but
also
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keep
buying international
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products
as well
.
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IELTS essay Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
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