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Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before going in public road.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before going in public road. jVojy
These days, more and more human beings believe that people should pass a cycling test before riding in public road. I supremely agree with this statement, and in this essay I will illustrate a number of points in favor of my opinion. From an overall perspective, there are wide variety of reasons why experts think that people should pass a exam prior to cycling in roadway. Perhaps the preliminary reason is that probability of occurring severe accident will be too low, thus individuals can ride their bike without any stress. A good illustration of this is that, in a recent survey it has been observed human beings who pass an cycling exam will be less likely to face an adverse situation compare to those who don’t take any test. In addition, nowadays if police can find any non-certified cyclist, that person ought to pay a good chunk of penalty. For instance, currently it is a ubiquitous scenario to see public paying ample amount of money on fine since they ride their pedal cycle without any approval from government. Furthermore, a person who passed cycling test will know all the rules and regulations. Thus, he will not experience any serious issues while riding his bike. Subsequently, they can learn various types of techniques like the amount of speed they need to maintain in various roads such as bend, straight etc. As a result, it will be too easy for them to control their bicycle, and it will be a smooth ride. To sum, I opine that it is necessary to take up a examination prior to cycling in roadway.
These days, more and more human beings believe that
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people
should pass a
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cycling
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test
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before
riding in public road. I
supremely
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agree
with this statement, and in this essay I will illustrate a number of points in favor of my opinion.

From an
overall
perspective, there are wide variety of reasons why experts
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think
that
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people
should pass
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a
exam prior to
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cycling
in roadway. Perhaps the preliminary reason is that probability of occurring severe accident will be too low,
thus
individuals can ride their bike without any
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stress
. A
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good
illustration of this is that, in a recent survey it has
been observed
human beings who pass
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an
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cycling
exam will be less likely to face an adverse situation compare to those who don’t take any
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test
.
In addition
, nowadays if police can find any non-certified cyclist, that person ought to pay a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
chunk of penalty.
For instance
,
currently
it is a ubiquitous scenario to
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see
public paying ample amount of money on fine since they ride their pedal cycle without any approval from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.

Furthermore
, a person who passed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cycling
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
will know all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations.
Thus
, he will not experience any serious issues while riding his bike.
Subsequently
, they can learn various types of techniques like the amount of speed they need to maintain in various roads such as bend, straight etc.
As a result
, it will be too easy for them to control their bicycle, and it will be a smooth ride.

To sum, I opine that it is necessary to take up
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
examination prior to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cycling
in roadway.
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IELTS essay Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before going in public road.

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268 words
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