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Some experts believe that cyclist should pass a test before riding a bike. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that cyclist should pass a test before riding a bike. Dw72W
One of the often discussed issues nowadays is unprofessional cyclists taking up the roads. Now people are starting to realize that there is a need in passing the riding test before going out cycling on the road. Although, passing a test may be a complex requirement for the bike riders, I tend to think that passing the driving test is crucial in providing safe conditions on the road. On the one hand, the test will give drivers awareness of difficulties they might face on the road. It will prepare them for the challenges and give them an opportunity to acknowledge the consequences of their actions while riding a bike. Moreover, it will hopefully encourage better communication between different road users. On the other hand, there will be less collisions, the cyclists will be required to follow the basics of driving rules on the road and if the laws are not going to be met, the adequate measures will be taken. That is to say, taking a driving test will prevent the ignorance of stop signs and traffic lights among cyclists, making them guilty of speeding and possibly reducing the amount of deaths. For example, in the last 5 years the death rate of cyclists in UK increased marginally due to the absence of knowledge in general road rules. In conclusion, taking everything measured into account in our final analysis we can say that passing the test is key for the secure traffic movements and should not be neglected.
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discussed issues nowadays is unprofessional cyclists taking up the
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.
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people
are starting to realize that there is a need in
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passing
the riding
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test
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before
going out cycling on the
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road
. Although,
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passing
a
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test
may be a complex requirement for the bike riders, I tend to
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think
that
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passing
the driving
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test
is crucial in providing safe conditions on the road.

On the one hand, the
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test
will give drivers awareness of difficulties they might face on the
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road
. It will prepare them for the challenges and give them an opportunity to acknowledge the consequences of their actions while riding a bike.
Moreover
, it will
hopefully
encourage better communication between
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different
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road
users.

On the other hand
, there will be
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less
collisions, the cyclists will
be required
to follow the basics of driving
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rules
on the
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road
and if the laws are not going to
be met
, the adequate measures will
be taken
.
That is
to say, taking a driving
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test
will
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prevent
the ignorance of
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stop
signs and traffic lights among cyclists, making them guilty of speeding and
possibly
reducing the amount of deaths.
For example
, in the last 5 years the death rate of cyclists in UK increased
marginally
due to the absence of knowledge
in general
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road
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rules
.
In conclusion
, taking everything measured into account in our final analysis we can say that
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passing
the
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test
is key for the secure traffic movements and should not
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay Some experts believe that cyclist should pass a test before riding a bike.

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