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all cars and buses will be driverless _ do the advantages of driverless cars outweigh the disadvantages

all cars and buses will be driverless _ do the advantages of driverless cars outweigh the disadvantages kWXeK
The overall quality of our transaction as well as how convenient we are can depend on numerous elements, including the type of vehicle we opt for transporting which is predicted all transportation systems, namely cars, buses, and trucks will be automatic without a driver. Now the question is whether this prediction can serve any purpose. I partially disagree, and in the following paragraphs, I will discuss the main reasons. First, the sheer advantages that driverless cars bring about should never be easily ignored. That is, given driving non-stop, it can be beneficial for traveling for distance. unlike the humans that need to rest in a day, they can work consistently which results in improving the efficiency and efficiency of movement alongside without being time-consuming. Furthermore, due to the fact that they are equipped with a cruise control system, the number of accidents is decreased, such as some new models of Toyota, or Ford. Nevertheless, I believe despite acquiring plausible profits, it can cause some adverse impact on the societies. In fact, because of making budget through these machines, this type of job will be eliminated. Some people do not have a sufficient academic qualification, thus, they turn to drive cars to meet their needs. An illustration here is taxi drivers, these people will suffer from serious financial issues, inevitably they will turn to a new job. Besides, due to the possibility of being hacked or ruined in the middle of the rood, using of these vehicles will not interesting for crowds. Having lived in a technology-driven world, people are more knowledgeable than ever. In some parts of the world, Iraq as an example, people have witnessed the possibility of the attack by terrorists, consequently, they do not take any risks, and tend to travel peacefully. In conclusion, I believe the downsides of this attitude outweigh its upsides. depleting job opportunities along with the threat of being hacked can illustrate the ascertain of my beliefs. Unless the governments endeavor to eliminate these troubles, nations would not be prosperous.
The
overall
quality of our transaction
as well
as how convenient we are can depend on numerous elements, including the type of vehicle we opt for transporting which
is predicted
all transportation systems,
namely
cars, buses, and trucks will be automatic without a driver.
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Now
the question is whether this prediction can serve any purpose. I
partially
disagree, and in the following paragraphs, I will discuss the main reasons.

First
, the sheer advantages that driverless cars bring about should never be
easily
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ignored
.
That is
,
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given
driving non-
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stop
, it can be beneficial for traveling for distance.
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unlike
the humans that need to rest in a day, they can work
consistently
which results in improving the efficiency and efficiency of movement alongside without being time-consuming.
Furthermore
, due to the fact that they
are equipped
with a cruise control system, the number of accidents
is decreased
, such as
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some
new models of Toyota, or Ford.

Nevertheless
, I believe despite acquiring plausible profits, it can cause
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some
adverse impact on the societies. In fact,
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because
of making budget through these machines, this type of job will
be eliminated
.
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Some
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people
do not have a sufficient academic qualification,
thus
, they turn to drive cars to
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meet
their needs. An illustration here is taxi drivers, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will suffer from serious financial issues,
inevitably
they will turn to a new job.

Besides
, due to the possibility of
being hacked
or ruined in the middle of the rood, using of these vehicles will not
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interesting
for crowds. Having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in a technology-driven world,
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people
are more knowledgeable than ever. In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
parts of the world, Iraq as an example,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have witnessed the possibility of the attack by terrorists,
consequently
, they do not take any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risks
, and tend to travel
peacefully
.

In conclusion
, I believe the downsides of this attitude outweigh its upsides.
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depleting
job opportunities along with the threat of
being hacked
can illustrate
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the ascertain
of my beliefs. Unless the
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governments
endeavor to eliminate these troubles, nations would not be prosperous.
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IELTS essay all cars and buses will be driverless _ do the advantages of driverless cars outweigh the disadvantages

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
337 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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