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letter for job as look after

letter for job as look after N3wbb

I write to express my interest about the position of looked after that you advertise on the magazine on Tuesday I really would like to do work for you because I think it will be a good experience for you and me I like to check if I could appear for an interview this week since I have completed my writing course from the real estate college and have 3 years experience related to the profile I like to travel know about different culture and meet new people currently I am working for an irish family and I take care of children who is it vary from 3 to 8 enjoy spending time the kids and I have learnt a lot I am still really patients tidy reliable and hardworking I trust the information that share help in assistance to you it would it would help alot it if you could arrange for an interview in this week itself and I am in the city at this moment I shall be available to answer any further question as a look forward to a prompt response from your end

I write to express my interest about the position of looked after that you advertise on the magazine on Tuesday I really
 would like to do work for you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 experience for you and me I like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 if I could appear for an interview this week since I have completed my writing course from the real estate college and have 3 years experience related to the profile I like to travel know about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 culture and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
currently
 I am working for an Possible spelling mistake found.IrishirisIrisIrtishIRISIRISL
irish
 family and I take care of children who is it vary from 3 to 8 enjoy spending time the kids and I have Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 a lot I am still
really
 patients tidy reliable and hardworking I trust the information that share This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in assistance to Consider adding a comma here.you,
you
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "it would".it would
it would it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
Possible spelling mistake found.a lotlotplotslotaltoaloft
alot
 it if you could arrange for an interview in this week Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).itself, and
itself and
 I am in the city at this moment I shall be available to answer any further
 question as a look forward to a prompt response from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end