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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for empo.why are these laws introduced?do you think they are positive or negative devey?

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for empo. why are these laws introduced? do you think they are positive or negative devey? 2lGWj
There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of few nation have introduced rules to limit working time for workers is unbiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of thought open that it is worthless, however others consider that a coupley of difficulties, also occur because of the same. Although this has a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborate on upcoming paragraphs. Initating with the best possible benefits, the most significant advantage is, give opportunity to work everyone in society by restricting hours work for workers. Individuals are doing great time jobs for money along with it people earn money for future and for children education learning skills. This problem could also solve by the government requiring to pay tax for workers. As a result human will work quickly and easily as well as cearfull for both future parents and children. On the paradoxical side, there are same drawback as well, First and foremost some children live with all family and there the Government making rulys students do work only few hours because they giving time own education, after work with this earn too little money with this how management own school and college fees and food, accommodation rent with grandparents. Their children are not doing work from own parents. For instance, but numerous of people doing job for their financial situation. But such police does not let satisfaction. Secondly, some countries allow children to work few hours a week or month. The remaining time is lisuse for them and to have more money, can put worng step such as theft with this one time become criminals. Consequently, workers spend their financial Times for a job, hence, they prefer wrong way to earn money. To conclude, Without any double, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has many positives then the negative points of this nation may not be understood.
There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of
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have introduced
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rules
to limit working
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for
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unbiquitous
across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of
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thought
open that it is worthless,
however
others consider that a
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coupley
of difficulties,
also
occur
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because
of the same. Although this has a plethora of merits
yet
numerous demerits are
also
there which will be elaborate on upcoming paragraphs.
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Initating
with the best possible benefits, the most significant advantage is, give opportunity to
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work
everyone in society by restricting hours
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work
for
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workers
. Individuals are doing great
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time
jobs for
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money
along with it
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people
earn
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money
for future and for
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children
education learning
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skills
. This problem could
also
solve by the
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government
requiring
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to pay
tax for
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workers
.
As a result
human will
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work
quickly
and
easily
as well
as
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cearfull
for both future parents and
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children
. On the paradoxical side, there are same drawback
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children
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live
with all family and there the
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Government
making
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rulys
students do
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work
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only
few hours
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because
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they giving
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time
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own
education, after
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with this earn too
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money
with this how management
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school and college fees and food, accommodation rent with grandparents. Their
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from
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own
parents.
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,
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numerous of
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people
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such police does not
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,
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countries
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allow
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children
to
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few hours a week or month. The remaining
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is
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lisuse
for them and to have more
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money
, can put
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worng
step such as theft with this one
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time
become criminals.
Consequently
,
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workers
spend their financial
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Times
for a job,
hence
, they prefer
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wrong
way to earn
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.
To conclude
, Without any double, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has
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many
positives then the
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negative
points of this nation may not
be understood
.
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IELTS essay Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for empo. why are these laws introduced? do you think they are positive or negative devey?

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