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An important lesson I have learned

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An important lesson I have learned in life is task management. Firstly, to manage the task well, it is necessary to divide it into small parts, which is called planning, and do them step by step. By doing so, we will find the task easier to solve. After outlining the plan, we need to follow it strictly to have the work done on time. In fact, if we leave all the tasks till the last minute, we may feel overloaded, being unable to handle the problem well. Furthermore, with the task carried out over a period of time, if there is any problem with it, we still have time to find the solution. Therefore, the problem can be solved properly without any delay. In summary, in order to solve the task well, it is most important to break it into small pieces and work on them gradually.
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Firstly
, to manage the
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task
well, it is necessary to divide it into
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small
parts, which
is called
planning, and do them step by step. By doing
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so
, we will find the
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task
easier to solve. After outlining the plan, we need to follow it
strictly
to have the work done on time. In fact, if we
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leave
all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
till the last minute, we may feel overloaded, being unable to handle the problem well.
Furthermore
, with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
carried out over a period of time, if there is any problem with it, we
still
have time to find the solution.
Therefore
, the problem can
be solved
properly
without any delay. In summary, in order to solve the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
well, it is most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to break it into
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small
pieces and work on them
gradually
.
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IELTS essay An important lesson I have learned

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  American English
1 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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