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Some countries have introduced a law to limit the number of hours employer can ask their employee to work. Why & positive or negative development.

Some countries have introduced a law to limit the number of hours employer can ask their employee to work. Why & positive or negative development. 6mlL3

The number of employees' working hour is always an endless discussion in every company all over the work. Some governments have bring out a law limiting the total of hours a worker can do with the purpose of avoiding stress and exploitation. In my opinion, it is a positive development raising staff's standard of living and maintaining a healthy lifestyle. The main reason for this development is that employers allow or force their workers to deliver their tasks for a long period of time per day such as over 12 hours. Since they want to increase their company's productivity, they tend to use their workforce which gets accustomed to their work and easily satisfy requirements

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 out a law limiting the total of hours a worker can do with the purpose of avoiding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and exploitation. In my opinion, it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 development raising staff's standard of living and maintaining a healthy lifestyle. The main reason for this development is that employers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 or force their workers to deliver their tasks for a long period of time per day such as over 12 hours. Since they want to increase their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's productivity, they tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 their workforce which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
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