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TELLING A BOOK THAT CHANGE YOUR THOUGHTS

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Previously, I haven’t read any books carefully, when I took any books and read some front page the feeling of sleepiness come up. In this time, the disease make everyone staying at home and I decided to read as least as 3 books in this period. Finally, I found a great book with the tile “50 things didn’t teach in school” which bring a new look about the life. I was very surprised and expansion of sight about society. Some students believed that if they had a good diploma after they graduated at high school or famous university, they wouldn’t worry about the employment issues. As a matter of fact, the knowledge of students in university is not enough to workout in company and the employers need more soft skill in any jobs. Apparently, in university or high school, some teachers or lectures virtually teach about abstract theories, and students often try to cram knowledge even they didn’t understand and wondered why they must to learn by heart this knowledge which not applicable in daily life. However, this book showed me how to make a plan for my future career as soon as possible, and beside learning as many soft skills as possible in order not to be confused when it’s time to make one’s way in the world( to be equipped to make one’s way in the world). The way to find both your strengths and weaknesses, the next step, you must promote strengths or restrict and improve weaknesses. Otherwise, in every jobs, success and failure always together, learning of accepts is the best lesson that you must to learn. In conclusion, from the book I found that success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.
Previously, I haven’t read any
books
carefully
, when I took any
books
and read
some
front page the feeling of sleepiness
come
up. In this time, the disease
make
everyone
staying
at home and I decided to read as
least
as 3
books
in this period.
Finally
, I found a great
book
with the tile “50 things didn’t teach in school” which bring a new look about the life. I was
very
surprised and expansion of sight about society.
Some
students believed that if they had a
good
diploma after they
graduated
at high school or
famous
university, they wouldn’t worry about the employment issues. As a matter of fact, the knowledge of students in university is not
enough
to workout in
company
and the employers need more soft
skill
in any jobs.
Apparently
, in university or high school,
some
teachers or lectures
virtually
teach about abstract theories, and students
often
try to cram knowledge even they didn’t understand and wondered why they
must to
learn by heart this knowledge which not applicable in daily life.
However
, this
book
showed
me how to
make
a plan for my future career as
soon
as possible, and beside learning as
many
soft
skills
as possible in order not to
be confused
when it’s time to
make
one’s way in the world
(
to
be equipped
to
make
one’s way in the world). The way to find both your strengths and weaknesses, the
next
step, you
must
promote strengths or restrict and
improve
weaknesses.
Otherwise
, in every
jobs
, success and failure always together, learning of accepts is the best lesson that you
must to
learn.
In conclusion
, from the
book
I found that success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.
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IELTS essay TELLING A BOOK THAT CHANGE YOUR THOUGHTS

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