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Some countires says that driving age shold be 18 years and some consider it be 25 discus it

Some countires says that driving age shold be 18 years and some consider it be 25 discus it NrEd0
Countries are considering the age of driving to reduce the accidents in the countries. Some countries view is that it shold be eighteen years and other considering it should be 25. It is said that 25 years is a right age to drive the vehicle to decrease the accidents in the country. They are considering that youngsters whose age is 25 years are more wise and experienced to drive with safety and good manners On the other hand some countries say that mostly accidents are occurring due to negligence and rushness and it is improbable to say that youngsters of 25 years age are more experienced than the age of eighteen years and 25 years age is too late to allow driving. They exemplify that if the youngsters whose age is 18 years is allowed to vote the they might have much responsibile how to drive so the 18 years is right age to drive. In conclusion 18 years age is better to drive then 25 years which is too late to allow driving as to decrease the accidents are depending upon responsibility not on age.
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are considering the
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age
of driving to
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reduce
the
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accidents
in the
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countries
.
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Some
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countries
view is that
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it shold
be eighteen years and other considering it should be 25. It
is said
that 25 years is a right
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age
to
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drive
the vehicle to decrease the
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accidents
in the
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country
. They are considering that youngsters whose
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age
is 25 years are more wise and experienced to
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drive
with safety and
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good
manners
On the other hand
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some
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countries
say that
mostly
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accidents
are occurring due to negligence and
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rushness
and it is improbable to say that youngsters of 25 years
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age
are more experienced than the
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age
of eighteen years and 25 years
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age
is too late to
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allow
driving. They exemplify that if the youngsters whose
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age
is 18 years is
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allowed
to vote
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the they
might have much
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responsibile
how to
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drive
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so
the 18 years is right
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age
to
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drive
.
In conclusion
18 years
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age
is better to
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drive
then 25 years which is too late to
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allow
driving as to decrease the
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accidents
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are depending
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IELTS essay Some countires says that driving age shold be 18 years and some consider it be 25 discus it

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  American English
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