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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Do you agree or disagree?

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. KWQK1
It has been observed that, some people think wearing uniform at school is best for all the employees as it shows the. Identity of a particular company. I firmly, bolster to the late statement my opinion is justified further. The foremost argument I should put forward, that wearing uniform must be a good idea as it shows own company or office identity. Moreover, wearing uniform at work shows proper discipline as well as respect to their on companies. Many companies like Apollo Reliance are giving uniform to all the employees must wear it. As stated, uniform should be given to all the employees at it also shows culture and respect to. Adding to this, uniform should be wear with completely iron and with all the discipline. All the employees must follow the rules and regulations of the company. Many malls like Vadodara Central supermarket Big Bazaar Inorbit aap provide a proper uniform to their own employees to be where it will stop it also shows how professionally they work. However, many people don't wear it as they think that wearing different clothes are colourful clothes will be good for employees. They will wear whatever they want to wear it will stop they will not recognised by the particular company and also it shows that they are not profession in their own life. Also they are not aware of work culture so they do not wear uniform. To conclude, it can be stated that wearing uniform is very fantastic for all the employees as it shows identity profession and culture work. Nevertheless, all can contribute in a small change of wearing uniform at work.
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at school is best for all the
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Identity of a particular
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firmly
, bolster to the late statement my opinion
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The foremost argument I should put forward, that wearing
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company
or office identity.
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uniform
at
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work
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shows
proper discipline
as well
as respect to their on
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companies
.
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companies
like Apollo Reliance are giving
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uniform
to all the
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employees
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must
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wear
it. As stated,
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given
to all the
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at it
also
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culture and respect to.

Adding to this,
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uniform
should be
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wear
with completely iron and with all the discipline. All the
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employees
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must
follow the
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and regulations of the
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Many
malls like Vadodara Central supermarket
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Big
Bazaar
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Inorbit
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aap
provide a proper
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to their
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employees
to be where it will
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also
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shows
how
professionally
they work.

However
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for
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. They will
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it will
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that they are not profession in their
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culture
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uniform.

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is
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fantastic for all the
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employees
as it
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identity profession and culture
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work
.
Nevertheless
, all can contribute in a
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work
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IELTS essay Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
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