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Describe your first day at school

Describe your first day at school DNPn6

Well. There are plenty diffirent schools in our Uzbekistan. For instance kindergarden, primary, secondary, high and other schools. Exactly I know that I really can not remember about my first day. However, I can remember when I was transferred from kindergarden to primary school. It was in Kokand, the capital city of Fergana about in 2001 year. As it was my initially in my new school, I went to my school with my babysitter. Also I was searching for my new class via my babysitter. I accurantly was distraught because my babysitter had been leaving me. We found my class. She submitted and gave to my new teacher at the school. I wept out "you took away me" I looked at in my new teacher and I said "you are not my teacher". My teacher said " Ok you are worry and all will be well" and she soothed me. As well as I stayed at school via my first new teacher.

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