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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

We always heard that practice makes a man perfect. Some businesses are finding fresher employees are lacking in interpersonal skills such as communication skills and decision-making skills. Most of the times it's happening due to lack of experience. Let us discuss the reasons and some possible solutions with relevant examples. To begin with, when any company hires a new employee, they train their employee to make them working in all kind of situations. For instance, the G4s security company has offices in Canada and the USA and this company is known for its employee's customer skills and hard work. Somehow, freshers need some experience to learn co-operative skills and it is not their fault because they can not learn all from theoretical knowledge. They do not have that confidence initially to make any decisions which they gain with time. Consequently, employees face awkward situations in their workplace because they are not well prepared and get accused by their employers. To overcome this situation, the education system should include subject especially interpersonal skills because they need the most when they will apply for any kind of job. The worker will have enough confidence to handle the situations and they will know a little bit in advance how to interact with clients. Another solution could be that they should be working as a trainee for a few months in office. To put it in a nutshell, new member lack sometimes in co-operative and other decision-making skills. They can learn with the time to make important decisions which can benefit an organisation. The employer also should co-operate with their workers in their initial working period. Wed Sep 16 2020 Your opinion Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it. If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score. Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion. Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion: . . . do you agree or disagree? . . . do you think. . . ? . . . your opinion. . . ? Read more in the eBook The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ » * free ebook for Premium users Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content. In addition to this, they learn a sense of cooperation and sharing with other persons of the society. for instance, they could grow plants and trees at public places and this would be helpful not only to make the surrounding clean and green but reduce the pollution also to great extent. moreover, they could arrange awareness programmes in society and set an example among the natives of the state. this will make the social bonding strong between the individuals and this will also enhance their social skills.
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in co-operative and other decision-making
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decisions which can benefit an
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IELTS essay Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
506 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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