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Some believe trees are important for the cities whilst others believe trees are not suitable for cities. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some believe trees are important for the cities whilst others believe trees are not suitable for cities. a7GPY
It is often claimed by some people that towns are having trees are more vital. while others say that forests are not crucial to a metropolis. In my opinion, having trees in the cities are extremely declining the temperature in the atmosphere and providing fresh air for a healthier lifestyle. This essay will discuss both views and state my own opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. On the other hand, there are lots of reasons for having trees in the cities to safeguard the charm of the towns. In other words, in the modern era, not only building is given beauty but the trees also can contribute to the town elegant pretty. Moreover, the forests can provide fresh air to an extremely important for the metropolitan areas. For instance, compared with the past decade, in the present era, cities are rapidly increasing the development of cities across the world, especially in China which is engaged to build more shopping Malls and apartment blocks that have recently been reported in the UN annual report. Therefore, the trees are more vital for a peaceful lifestyle. On the flip side, the trees are led to be cities as rubbish and pull back some significant charm of the town. This way would affect the tourists to the towns and it will impact on country's economic growth. In the meantime, the roads or flyovers are likely to be intercepted by trees which are created more congestion in the place. Hence, nature is sometimes not suitable for the metropolitan. According to my opinion, trees are more useful to not cities only but also everywhere due to diminishing the temperature and carrying out the earth to next generation. In conclusion, there have been manifold benefits like saving the earth due to reducing the temperature. In contrast, sometimes it would impact the economy owing to visitors not being satisfied because of the congestion and not being cleaned city.
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while
others say that forests are not crucial to a metropolis. In my opinion, having
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trees
in the
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cities
are
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declining the temperature in the atmosphere and providing fresh air for a healthier lifestyle. This essay will discuss both views and state my
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own
opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

On the other hand
, there are lots of reasons for having
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trees
in the
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cities
to safeguard the charm of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
towns
.
In other words
, in the modern era, not
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only
building is
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given
beauty
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but
the
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trees
also
can contribute to the
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town
elegant pretty.
Moreover
, the forests can provide fresh air to an
extremely
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important
for the metropolitan areas.
For instance
, compared with the past decade, in the present era,
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cities
are
rapidly
increasing the development of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
across the world,
especially
in China which
is engaged
to build more shopping Malls and apartment blocks that have recently
been reported
in the UN annual report.
Therefore
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
are more vital for a peaceful lifestyle.

On the flip side, the
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trees
are led
to be
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cities
as rubbish and pull back
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some
significant charm of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
. This way would affect the tourists to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
towns
and it will impact on country's economic growth. In the meantime, the roads or flyovers are likely to
be intercepted
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
which
are created
more congestion in the place.
Hence
, nature is
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sometimes
not suitable for the metropolitan.

According to my opinion,
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trees
are more useful to not
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cities
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only
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but
also
everywhere due to diminishing the temperature and carrying out the earth to
next
generation.

In conclusion
, there have been manifold benefits like saving the earth due to reducing the temperature.
In contrast
,
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sometimes
it would impact the economy owing to visitors not
being satisfied
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because
of the congestion and not
being cleaned
city.
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IELTS essay Some believe trees are important for the cities whilst others believe trees are not suitable for cities.

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5 paragraphs
319 words
6.5
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