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Some believe that children's success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents.do u agree or disagree with the statement

Some believe that children's success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents. do u agree or disagree with the statement dWV7
Parents play an important role in success of their children in adulthood, i totally agree with the statement. As parents take different steps to make their children successful in their life which enable them to stand in good position in future. Nowadays, parents are educating their children so that they get know how to talk in the society moreover, they get knowledge how to sit stand in front of other person. Some parents become angry when there children perform wrong and there children get to Know that they have done something wrong which is a good point of success
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successful in their life which enable them to stand in
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knowledge how to sit stand in front of other person.
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IELTS essay Some believe that children's success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents. do u agree or disagree with the statement

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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